That was really good! My applause. =)

This was a good story, the characters seem very realistic, and you can feel their emotions like they are your own. It was very well written, I loved it!

Wow, I loved this. It's really powerful, and really expressive.

D:

That was...upsetting. Very excellently written, you convey anger very well. Some people find it easy, to others it's hard. It comes naturally to you. Nothing seemed strained. Good job. ^^

ON TO SLASH! >D

I have two words for this story: Absolutely amazing. I can picture Mark wanting something like that, since he's always the one to detach and survive. Roger's reaction was, if I may say so, perfect. I like your writing style, and am looking forward to reading more of your stories in the future. Keep writing!

Aww. That was beautifully written and just really sad. (So of course I'm torturing myself by reading it alone in my room, thirteen minutes 'till New Year's.) I'd really like it if you wrote a sequel piece, maybe about when Mark and Roger meet again -- years down the road or something like that. Please?

Aww! That's so sad and horrible and I need more! I need to know what happens! Please update? PLEASE?

Guess who! Hehe. It's your lovable, huggable, sweet, talented, smart, beautiful, ruler of the universe friend! You guessed it--the infamous Bayleigh! Ahem. Anyway, I just got through reading your story and loved it. I knew I would. Also, I read your other reviews and they liked it, too! See! I told you people would love it! As I was saying, you've got a great story going on here. But Roger's right--Mark's a dumbass. Oh, and by the way, the whole "You already did" part made me die of laughter. It may be because I'm totally sugar high right now, but I really thought that was funny.

I have a question, though--why did Roger kick him out? That ain't right! You're ruining their relationship! Hehe. Then again, like me, you are evil! I guess we both have fun screwing up the relationships of our favorite couples. Speaking of screwing, where did Mark get all of that courage from? He did make the first move, after all. And why did Roger let him anyway? Is it something about that hidden passion you're always proclaiming they have?

Anyway, you've definitely got to continue writing this story. It's very good, and I REALLY, REALLY, REALLY, REALLY love it. Awesome work! Update soon!

It's a great story and a sad idea that Mark would purposefully give himself AIDS but YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT LIKE THAT! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS, DID MARK GET AIDS? DOES ROGER FORGIVE HIM FOR HIS STUPIDITY? Please write more...

to see mark that desperate as to take advantage of his best friend like that, knowing it was probable for roger to remember the next morning.
and then to be kicked out, roger forcing him to leave...

aw man.

i liked it, good job!! ok that sounded cheesy, but really i like it, and i wouldnt mind seeing a sequal peice, either when roger rushes after him, or meeting each other years down the road, something.

but still great fic

lanna

Hey thats really good please continue.

Will there be more??