Brilliant!

what more can i say...bloody brilliant!

LOL I think I'd go along with Simone's idea...

Great job!

very good ficlet. sequel?

It's... interesting. It's definitely well-written and easy to read and follow. I'm just not sure I like the idea of Simone being a lesbian, more because she's military than because she's Jack's sistser. That's just me, though. I do like their relationship, though, and I like the fact that Sam knew her before she knew Jack but didn't put two and two together.

Glad you're brave enough to put out a story even though you're not sure what the reception will be. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Lol so funny i loved it! is there any more? JJ:P

hmm interesting, I like the relationship between Jack and Simone, very interesting,. I always love seeing him with his family. I enjoyed the story, very well written

I enjoyed the story. Jack with a lesbian sister, nice idea! And her name, very nice. I just met the coolest girl with the name Simone so I like the story a lot!

intresting ideas, very original : )

A great big fluffy towel!

cool story - loved it to bits keep up the good work!

I like, tis different and has plenty of intrigue. do we get more?

I liked it. I love early SG-1 stories, putting in the background on why he hates scientists was ingenious! Made me chortle anyway.

It was sweet how he went to Carter, that was really nice. Keep up the good work.