Poor Koshino. This story was so subtle and deep, like most of your other stories. I like that.

concise yet very eloquent. ::applauds::

Wow. Not a very common set-up for a SenKosh fic. Very nice. And I find your execution very eloquent. I wish you'd explore this storyline further though I know how authors hate being begged for a sequel. With your style and the appeal of the premise, I'm sure it'd be a very interesting read. Plus, I havent come across many worthwhile SenKosh fics lately. Goodluck to your other projects.