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gersquin_065 2007-10-02 . chapter 6
very good, team 8 is my favorite, and yet is so unfair, they are the less apreciated team around, ohh the injustice .
episode59 2007-09-04 . chapter 5
aw
team bonding
episode59 2007-09-04 . chapter 4
shikamaru took up smoking
may he call quitline and die a late death
xD
nice
episode59 2007-09-04 . chapter 3
no
even though kiba just got pwned in the other chapter
doesn't mean is stupid
well.. mayb a little...
=]
episode59 2007-09-04 . chapter 2
i think kiba just got owned
xD
episode59 2007-09-02 . chapter 1
aw
soo sad
nice storyy
Kamden 2007-02-26 . chapter 4
I love short stories about Team! And yes, they are WAY underappreciated. Good job, and try to fit a ShinoHina in there somewhere.
NinaWilliamsSilentAssassin 2007-02-25 . chapter 4
Wow! This is amazing! I liked all the chapters. You look at things from a, not to be mean but I can't think of any other way to describe it, 'sick' point of view. Each chapter left me feeling... um... Weird. But in an annoyingly good way... You know what I'm just going to stop trying to describe it... because it's coming out negative... When it's super positive.
Anyways, INCREDIBLE job! YOU ROCK! Keep up the awesome work ^_^!
NarutosMego 2007-02-24 . chapter 4
I love team ten and team 8, so I bet ther ewill be a whole TEAM 8 ARC in store for us. We just have to be patient, that's all... THEN WE STRIKE!! I thought it was really cute ho wyou said that the baby would be their baby. They deserve, it after all. Is this the end of the whole thing? NO! Is it finished and complete? Let me know if it is!! Thatnks for updating!!

Mego-chan
Jafilish 2007-02-24 . chapter 4
Wow, I really like the fourth chapter... deep. I find the way you portray Team 8 really good and your thoughts that you show in each chapter are very enlightening somehow. It's definitely time for Team 8 to shine...
Michiru's Mirror 2007-01-19 . chapter 3
This is fabulous. Chapter one literally took my breath away--the suffering was tangible. Poor Hinata.
You're right about chapter two, it was cute, and had the potential to be really funny, but wasn't. It was not in any way, shape or form bad, though. It was genuinely cute and well written.
Chapter three was perfect--Shino the "praying mantis" is a great image. Naruto is great because all the teams have their own dynamics, and you nailed team eight. Great job.
Garowyn 2006-11-07 . chapter 3
Great work.
Relala 2006-09-17 . chapter 3
the first cahpter was by-far the best.

gah it was so sad.
Zero-Vision 2006-08-25 . chapter 3
cool
DbKiT 2006-08-25 . chapter 3
I like where this chapter was headed. I know that all these chapters are supposed to be un related drabble. But maybe for the next chapter you could head off of this one and actually have Shino BE the leader in some given situation. It should be interesting. How he deals with Hinata's weakness and Kiba's bold stupidness.

Or perhaps a Hinata focused chapter. She knows she's weak. And she knows that her team mates know. And Hinata muses over the fact that she can recognize the lack of faith Kiba and Shino have in her abilities.

Or maybe a Kiba centric chapter focusing on him arguing that he IS competent and not stupid. And how much he wishes Shino would shove it for making him feel inferiror (After Shino becomes team leader)

Thats all I got.
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