Was reading this story(guess that's a bit obvious?) and noticed something I've seen before - a trunk that one can live in as if it were an apartment. We know that it is possible to survive inside a closed trunk due to GoF, and the books, and fanfiction all say the trunk can have security to only be opened by the owner. But never is it addressed whether the trunk can be CLOSED by someone else, and what happens if the trunk is closed when the owner is in it? Can he/she open it from the inside? If not, and he/she is the only one that can open it, that makes for a very serious issue.

Note: in case I wasn't clear, the was NOT a review implying plaguerism, simply an observation that has never(to my knowledge) been addressed.

great story

Witowsmp is an excellent story writer but seriously needs to learn how to use the words 'bring, brought, and took, take, taken'. The American use of these words is totally wrong and should not be used in stories about Britains or Britain. I know this is one of my pet hates but misuse of a single word can alter an entire sentence and sometimes even the whole paragraph, people outside the Americas should not have to continually read stories while having to be prepared to substitute the correct words all the time.

I don't quite understand how an 11 year old girl and a 12 year old girl (not just girls, but children) could compete over a 12 year old boy. Other than that, so far the story is alright.

This is a great story, you've really got some awesome ideas. One thing I'd like to note (which may already have been noted before) is that the eye condition you mention in this chapter is actually astigmatism. I used to think it was 'A stigmatism' as well. Great job.

Just finished this story. EXCELLENT JOB. Looking forward to reading the other titles you have done.

this was a great story

so far this is one of the best stories i have ever read. keep up the fantastic work

You are amazing. I love this. Sorry about the short review but I'm supposed to be doing school. Anyways, stories=amazing!

Much love and thanks
~Kitz

Very well done!

Nice story.

I think I like the ending. It was... bittersweet! I can't believe that Harry defeated Moldy-Voldy so easily... and that he was taken off the grounds by an underwater port-key. In the beginning, I did not like the idea of having Harry and Hermione together, however I have warmed up to it and have actually liked this pairing. This is deffinately an awesome story and I love that Prof. Dumbledore and Harry have a close bond. This has been a great read, from beginning to end! You should really be proud of this story!

HA! I guess that answers the question about the Tri-Wizard tournament. However, I am anxious to see if Harry is involved in the tournament. Harry is always in the thick of things lately, and I wonder if that caries over into the tournament. I like how Ginny and Nevile's relationship is progressing. I think that what happened to Percy is justified, and I think he deserves more than a broken leg! Sirius is no longer on the market! Oh-no! :^D Great story! I love it so far! I can't wait to read more about the tournament.

Boo! I wanted Harry to end up with Ginny. I do agre with Hermionie though, because she is older and she is more book-smart. Poor Ginny though! Anywho, Sirius got hurt! GASP! At least this time he did not get thrown into a death veil. Mrs. Weasley has a right to be distant to Harry, but it is still shocking. Was Ron mentioned in this chapter? I like how he is not the main character and Ginny is (well of the Weasleys). Great chapter! ! !

Potter's Army is awesome. I like how Cedric Diggory is also apart of the Army. Will the Army become the DA from book 5? I can't wait to see how this turns out. And I like how right now it is not all about Hermionie and Ginny. NIce chapter!