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ms-erupt 2008-08-19 ch 31,	abuseI just sat up for two hours reading this, and it was worth every minute. I'm not surprised at the ending, though I'm a bit saddened. Franny and Two-Bit just aren't for each other. I really liked your characterization of Two-Bit and of Dallas. Two-Bit seems to fair relatively well in fanfiction, but I find that Dallas is always a bit too soft for my tastes. I like my Dallas 99% asshole, and you completely delivered. Great story, and thanks for sharing.
ronfanforever 2008-06-30 ch 24,	abuseGod I love Dally, you characterise him incredible well.
ronfanforever 2008-06-30 ch 8,	abuseI'm glad you named his sister Grace, I always think of her as a Grace.
ronfanforever 2008-06-30 ch 3,	abuse"I keep expecting to see some homeless guy walking around Tulsa with a shopping bag full of sleeves, cuz Lord knows I don’t have a clue what Steve does with ‘em all," Wow, I'm not one who quotes people in reviews but that line is the shit, I absolutley loved it. Great story, can't wait to keep on reading.
Nicole 2008-06-06 ch 31, anon.	abuseWow! that was great. you have some serious skills writing. i just couldnt stop reading it. its was sad in the end but thats how most books should be. keep writing. i will be around again looking for more storys to read and hopefully they will be as good as yours. Nicole
moony1981 2008-05-31 ch 31,	abusewrite sequel?
ProjektRev07 2008-05-02 ch 31,	abuseI really liked this one! Good job!
Greasy Gal 2008-03-16 ch 31,	abuseAw, oh my goodness. This was worth reading, that's for sure! I usually don't have an attention span for catching up with fics, but with this, I seriously could not stop reading. And now, I did finish reading ... and I'm kinda sad, lol. I like the fact of Two-Bit not seeing her again, sort of. It seems real, and kind of sad that they're not gonna see eachother again, but they left eachother on a good note. I love that. I'm starting to understand the whole title a lot better now, and I think it sums up the story just about right :) I really liked seeing the whole new person sort of outsider view on the whole thing. If the Socs and the Greasers stopped instigating everything, maybe the whole thing would just cool off. If I put everything I had to say about this in words right now, I'd be writing a novel myself. Great, great, work. It was a phenomenal story and I really enjoyed it. Looking forward to reading your others! --Alexa
BlindedxxFalcon 2008-03-10 ch 17,	abuseI am really loving this story. I'll probably finish it tonight or tomorrow. :D
Greasy Gal 2008-03-08 ch 6,	abuseMars, this is great so far. I don't know if I reviewed, yet--I'm too lazy to check. EVen if I did, it deserves to be reviewed again :) I love how Franny's so new to everything, and she doesn't even know what she's getting herself into. Yet she sort of had the same situation at home, but a little different. And how she wants to know where you can just be yourself, and all of that stuff, it fits in perfectly. It shows you that it's just not Black and White, but there's shades of Gray in the middle, if you know what I mean, lol. I've never seen a story with Two-Bit and a girl, and that's what probably drew me to the story the most. It's a really interesting topic to look into, and now that I've read it there's so many more things to like about it. I'm gonna try finishing this as soon as possible :D --Alexa
RiverChild7 2008-02-11 ch 31,	abuseI loved this story. Franny was believable and everything, and it was so sad that they didn't get together. I liked how she thought Kathy and Evie were horrible, but then she saw their points of view a little. Great story!
Soda pop rox2000 2008-01-11 ch 31,	abuseAwh Mars this was awesome! heartbreaking though, they way it ended. But I loved it! Onto my next story! Keep up the good work!
Queen Jane Approximately 2008-01-06 ch 31,	abuseThis is SO late, but I feel awful for being so out of the loop with your stories, for all the great things I hear about them on the boards, and I'm trying to catch up (I'm just going by what your profile said, even though you mentioned this one wasn't required first). I thought I'd just review and let you know that, because I am going to add this to my favorites and I figured you might think that was kind of random. I think I'll call it a night for now and start on your other stuff tomorrow and during the week, but I had to tell you anyway that this was fabulous. I really, really enjoyed reading it. I don't think there's much I can say that hasn't already been said, but this was really wonderful -- I love the way you write Two-Bit, it was so perfect, and your take on everybody else was just as I pictured them, as well. I liked Franny a lot, too. She did seem really emotional but I think she had good reason to be; she was a real, believable OFC with depth, and I thought she was a great addition. You're very talented, and I'm really excited to keep on reading, but it is three in the morning now so I'll continue later. Still, fantastic job with this. :) Peace, Queen Jane
Ski-Ming 2007-12-19 ch 3,	abuseOh, I'm enjoying this! The sentence about the homeless man with a shopping bag full of sleeves made me snort hard into the glass of milk I was drinking. And I like Franny. I think it's got something to do with the fact that she's a California girl like yours truly. I'm going to keep this short, because I intend on reading the whole of this story and that could take a while, but I'll probably jot some other praises in a bit. Mariko
Wildfire2345 2007-06-28 ch 31,	abuseHmm. I do like this. It's very nicely written, and everyone is characterized well. It is a tear-jerker of an ending, though! Two-Bit and Franny should've gotten together! But then, that's your call, I guess, and it did fit, so... I hope you write more! I'm off to read your other work! ;) ~Katrina

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