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Reviews for: First Son
IloveGaara4ever
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
OMG!! that was HOT!! I don't understand why you have so little revieuws. This story is AWSOME!! WRITE MORE!!
skyinthenightslove
2008-03-20 . chapter 1
that is so sweat! and pure and kind! omg it makes me feel so so happy and sad and now i cant stop crying!
a dreamer's attic
2007-11-13 . chapter 1
nice. Very nice.
Alex
2007-07-21 . chapter 1
Interesting.. really.
FigureInTheShadows
2006-12-19 . chapter 1
ohh! kewl story! ^_^ i'm into wings right now, so i'm kinda mesmerized by it. i like how angels=uchiha clan, but somehow it seems flipped, backwards... hmm... oh well! ^_^ great story.
xBlackxButterflyx
2006-10-12 . chapter 1
Wow this was good. Makes Naruto seem evil though, it would be cool if you had written the second verse that was related to Naruto. It's like a cliffhanger almost. You should change the sumary though. It makes
yue no rei
2006-08-18 . chapter 1
i was reading this and im like whoa.. nice perspective
Laughing Bandit D Royale
2006-06-20 . chapter 1
I'm afraid I do not understand.
I thought Naruto was suppose to be pure and innocent?
How could he 'taint' sasuke?
I'm afraid itdos not make much sense to me but I still find the fanfic intresting.
keep up the excellent work! ^.^
Ducky McQuack Quack
2006-06-17 . chapter 1
Oh my God...I loved this so much. First it reminded me of Greek Mythology...even thoughit has nothing to do with the greek (Right? I'm not that good at remembering so I don't know). And then it went to Naruto...so cool. I wish I could write like you do...and have the courage to put it up! (I have a fear that people will always flame me!)
quaero lumen
2006-06-17 . chapter 1
Oh... very interesting. Love to hear more...
lonelylulaby
2006-06-16 . chapter 1
this was an interesting rendition i liked the tid bit about the angel. Will you be updating? if you don't i still think its kewl

ja ne till next time
Azamiko
2006-06-16 . chapter 1
Oh...I like that...the ending is really neat, cuz you know what follows...
TearCat
2006-06-16 . chapter 1
First comment! Yay, ussualy I'm last, I loved that, the whole pure angel thing. I loved how you put it. Naruto is inviting isn't he... that sounded really weird. The noble path of vengence... ^_^ yay!
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