I LOVE this story so far. It's great. I wonder if this is going to be a Jim Alex story or if Alex and Patrick are gonna stay together.

I don't really know which way I want it to go. I do like Alex Jim pairing though. I love the story and I hope you finish it soon!

Love the story

Reilly (Riley)

that was so funny. she was kissing him and telling him she hated him at the same time! hope you write more!

That's a funny story. What happens on the date? O maybe Olivia and Elliot show up and ask her why is she out with Steele when she's dating Patrick. And Alix figures out that Olivia and Elliot are on a date. I just think that would be a funny story line for a chapter.

i love this story.u have to keep writing it..becuase it's aweseoma nd its funni...and i think i'm falling in love with patrick..he's such an adorable character

This was great. I really enjoyed it. It had a lot of nice touches. Since you seem to like Conviction, I have a Conviction Roleplay. Wanna join?

XxConvictionxX.

Nice! Great chapter!1

wow. please keep going. i like this story!

e&o forever!

a&p forever!

svu forever!

ha ha great chapter!Man wonder what elliot is going to do hmm...

Alex gets Busted lol

Patrick's screwed! Elliot is gonna kill him! Please keep going!

E&O forever!

SVU forever!

UUH OH Busted!

ha ha of course I want more!Great Idea...

Good idea, update soon!

ahahahahaha wow!