T__T Wa ha ha ha ha...!

Oh sweet Primus, this is hilarious!!

Wow, I had a riot reading this! It's one of the more original fics I've read, too. Good work!

Very cute and funny. Sideswipe was halarious, having to get the touchdown before tackling Ravage! XD
The Furbies were priceless. Pure genius, this is.
Aw, poor Dead End. XD

I was laughing so hard, I was coughing.

Snarky Prowl = Much love.

Scheming Sideswipe = Heart

The football game is genius.

This was totally fantastic.

NICE! I was in stitches the whole time reading!

It's really surprising that the Transformers wouldn't know more about football; it's a violent game featuring men shaped much like themselves, and don't they have a TV in the Ark? But you know what? Chartreuse! was all worth it.

This was hilarious. HILARIOUS.

Prowl is one devious little bastard and I adore him. Wonderful job with characterization of all the Autobots, but especially him.

Lol, that was just frigging awesome!

This was the third Transformers fic I read, back when I didn't know much about the show or the characters (or football). Your fic made me a Dead End fangirl and was laugh-out-loud entertaining even though I still don't know anything about football. Everything about it works so well, from Prowl's sense of humor to Grimlock's "who your daddy" to Ravage and the furbies. Great story.

HAHAHAHA!! XD please... give me a moment... can't feel my lungs... HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA! THIS fic of yours is a winner. XD It made me laugh HARD and you have no idea how much I needed that. YOU. ARE. A. GENIUS!!

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XD HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHA! XD

Here, have a cookie.

TAKE CARE!!

MISAO-CG

*giggles*
this always makes me laugh :D
so funny!


P.s. accidentaly added this 2 story alert >.< lol
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-rofl- this was so freakin hilarious!

Ah...the power of Furbies...Cute!

Hilarious story! It was really well written and was so funny that I literally almost fell out of my chair I was laughing so hard! Anyway, Keep up the awesome work!!