 spongyninja24 2007-12-08 . chapter 1 why the hell did you make him gay?!
plus kayko is not his "sister" if you've read the manga it says "yusukes girl" GET IT RIGHT!
(crickets and lawn mowers and popcicles in backround.)
wateve the fic was ok but why do you wanna make kurama hiei and yusuke gay.
either you have experience with that sort of thing or you have no repsect for the characters.
lol bye bye. |
 ruriginryu 2007-05-22 . chapter 1Hey...did you get permission to use the rascal flatt's song "What Hurts the Most"...cause if you didn't then you could have your profile...and rights on this site suspended, or permanently removed from this site...just to let you know. Also, you're a great author...I suck...if you haven't noticed...it's kinda sad though. Anyways, good luck with any of your other stories...if you have any.
.:^-^:.(that one's crying)
Ruri-Gin Ryu |
 xAdorablexAngelx 2006-10-06 . chapter 1WTF! Hello one thing is Keiko isn't his sister. Two why in the HELL did you make him gay! If your wondering if this is a flame than yes you are correct it is! My cousin said and you call yourself a writer. |
 Red Kitsune Flames 2006-06-25 . chapter 1That was a sweet way to end a story. |
 Duzen Broken DreamZ 2006-06-18 . chapter 1awe this is so sad! haha? |
 Ryuuwk 2006-06-17 . chapter 1I'm gonna hit you... that fict made me cry.. I like so much ficts about YYH and HxK that's my first fict about Keiko and Yusuke.. I wasnt ready to read it.. hehe lol |
 Queen of Black Roses 2006-06-16 . chapter 1AH! YOU UPDATED! you killed/injured Keiko, Yukina, Shiori(Shuii-chan's mom), and Shizuru! WHY?!?!?!?!?!?! I LIKE THEM!BUT I LOVE IT ANY WAY! |