I liked it. Adam is cool and creepy all at once. What an interestin concept... buy the antichrist some Ice cream. LOL
Great Job!

XD I like it. The idea of Dante working with Adam is interesting (Adam totally has more control over himself than I would), and the interaction was just fun. ^^

We`ll... It`s OK. I myself liked the book and I think you put Adam OC here. Besides Dante yust doesn`t look like a person you could stick into that Universe. Sorry :(

Despite some confusion on the subject, I haven't read Good Omens. None the less, I was really into this story from the get-go, it just had so much character and plot, though past tense, to it :D. Adam is well, he's the little kid with near limitless power, but all the same, he doesn't come off as too cheesy or anything bad, a few writing devices make sure of that. And Dante, well, Dante's Dante, but he had an interesting twisted situation to fit into, talking maturely to a kid who in turn was in ways astoundingly mature. The effect was strange, but compelling, which I think was more or less the intention, and I enjoyed it, so solid work all round :D.

Interesting :)

As a huge fan of Good Omens, I had to read this to see how a crossover could work, and I think you've done it well.