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Cyde
2009-09-13 . chapter 6
I'll set an alert for this story in the unlikely event that you decide to continue it.
apocalyps24
2009-06-02 . chapter 6
im really liking this story atm... now im pretty sure im one of the biggest die hard Goku fans out there (ive whatched all db series in at least 5 languages and at least 3 times per language... i love goku he is my fave all time superhero)... so as long as Goku remains the overall strongest im going to continue loving this story... as soon as Goku stops beeing the overall strongest i will stop reading this story...


apocalyps24
aback
2009-05-04 . chapter 6
please continue this fic
robzone
2008-12-11 . chapter 6
nicjob with this story are you going to continue it. it has some potential. but it needs to be seen more often than by going to your profile.
elrail
2008-10-06 . chapter 6
good idea please cont.
masaki yang yi1
2008-04-30 . chapter 6
Not bad at all,I can't wait until the next chapter.
Nysk
2008-03-19 . chapter 6
Too bad there has not been more of this work.
BlackRoseFire
2007-11-02 . chapter 6
Awesome. Please keep up the great work. I really enjoy this story.
Pac Man
2007-08-28 . chapter 1
I like it!
Taeniaea
2007-08-17 . chapter 6
Great Story!!
Blackdex
2007-08-10 . chapter 6
Not really my cup of tea (Willow, hot, with a touch of lemon). Ciao
Ryu Vision
2007-05-30 . chapter 6
yo...when the next update man...its been a while...

you got anything going for this one by any chance...

Ryu_Vision
Shlandria
2007-05-04 . chapter 6
I like this story...keep it going! ^_^
Vilkath
2007-04-11 . chapter 6
Pretty intersting fic, I hope you continue it. I can see a lot of options for Ranma in the future, the weakness point plus the gravity room could offer a lot of options for him. I wouldn't worry to much about him being stronger then goku, it would force you to rewrite a lot of the future plot of the story, but imo that can also be a good thing. Why should goku just be stronger? Compared to Goku Ranma's life was hell, and the more pain you go threw the stronger a sayian gets so I wouldn't say it's impossible for Ranma to get strong as or better then goku. Most just cop out, because they are afraid of writing some new story arcs. As for the new sayian girl, I kind of like her. But being a new character, she is going to require some real effort, and change things quite a bit, as with any long lasting OC's that you insert you have to ask yourself. Do they make the story better or just complicate things to much. I like her bringing a gravity room, it might give Ranma a little bit of an edge over Goku, but I don't think it's to impossible. The universe is big, and just about every space ship has some sort of artificial gravity. To think Bulma is the only one in the universe to have such a device is silly. The one that Kyuuri has may be weaker then Bulma's, not going as high, or stronger, something you might have to decide. Considering she came from a high tech planet, I don't think it's to hard to believe she got one to train with, sense she had no one to train against. Also another good argument as to why ranma can be stronger then Goku. With Kyuuri Ranma will have a sparing partner, of matching abilities to get stronger, something Goku never really had till after Vegeta. Not to mention his brain to come up with new methods of training, the Gravity Room plus some Ranma's methods equals win. Weakness point, breaking point training, weights etc all under increased gravity sounds like a winner to me. All goku really did was some weighted clothes, and push up type exercises. So as you can see, unlike most fans I can accept people being stronger then goku, especialy Ranma who puts a lot more pain and effort into his skills.
banty
2006-11-19 . chapter 1
Man i wish you would update this story since it's a pretty good read and just update dammit!
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