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| mcookiy 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseAWsome. Contjinu please |
| Swordsoul2000 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abusecool!! interseting idea. keep up the good work |
| Kurinju-sama 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuseNot bad, not bad at all. Though, I think you should explain in the beginning that women weren't always treated as they are now in the story. It would make the 'Kagome and Sango are BEFORE their time' more understandable seeing as how the saying is usually they are beyond their time. Good work though. Update soon! |
| Princess 2006-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey! That was awsome! You need to really really finish that soon! And the spelling was great to! BYE!! |
| Kyorose 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great story. I can already tell from this one chapter. I can't wait to read about what happens next. Will Kagome have miko powers in this? Since she has the shikon inside her, I would imagine so... |
| the-undefined 2006-07-08 ch 1, | abusehm... im reviewing another story.. second one tonight i like this one too... dang... i like the idea... im still trying to decide whether i should be suckered into yet ANOTHER story... yikes... what can i say... its summer... which makes everyone a bit more active in the community except maybe me... rant's done i swear! haha naraku? nice touch but handsome? where'd you get that? or was that just the mom trying to console her? hm... only 20 years though... wouldnt that make him practically a baby in demon years? i dunno... just a few thoughts... ick... what the heck i want both stories... dang... |
| angelXofXpeace 2006-06-27 ch 1, | abuseluv it please keep writing. |
| Silver-WindScar 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abuseHoly wow! Inu ain't called her a wench! OH MY GOD! AND HE HAS MANNERS! -faints- -awakens- Well, I have to say your story has knocked me for a loop and I expect to get knocked for a corkscrew, helix, and at least one more loop. (Those a roller coaster terms if you didn't get that.) Now, since I have nothing good enough to fit for an explanation, I am going to do two things. One: I am going to ask you with a statement if you can update this soon. Two: I'm gonna type a butt load on the newest chatper for one of my stories. NARAKU NEEDS TO BURN IN A FIERY HELL! XD |
| udontnome 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abusewow dis is a good story n difft also which is great hope u continue=} |
| joyfulsoul 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abusenice story..!!i'm really interested in the next chapter..! update soon..as well your other stories =) |
| Ginger 2006-06-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI must begin by saying that you have to be one of the best writers on the site. I'm often frustrated by reading work that hasn't been properly edited or thought out, works written by people who should have at least a decent command of the english language, and it is a pleasure to read your stories. I love the way you have written Inuyasha and Kagome. You keep the basic character traits but evolve the characters themselves until they fit the situations in which they are placed. I hope that makes sense. I like the plot so far and I truly look forward to reading more of the story, should you choose to continue it. |
| Lover of All Things Inuyash... 2006-06-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was really good. I cannot wait to hear more. And YEs, Souta DOES have a backbone! YAY! Now if only Buyo wuold show he actually has bones and is capable is movement...lol, good work! |
| animerev 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseNice story, can u tell us wat time period this is taking place in, its kind of confusing. Well, update soon. :) |
| Just A Bleeding Heart Liber... 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abusesounds pretty good so far. I'm adding it to my list of stuff to read! |
| kiwadoi seiitsu 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseWHo cares if you started another story while the others aren't finished... it's just all the more for us to enjoy^_^ UPDATE ONEGAI~! |