she's 30 kg?!?!? that's only 66 pounds there is no way that can be healthy

intersting ending. it would be cool to see what happens with the FTA. good luck with furture writing.

I read the whole story before posting a review. It was great. Except for the part where she stayed in California. I liked all the rest of it, honest I did.

Wow. Um.. It's a good plot and everything.. But it just seems un-realistic.. Stephanie was shot in the chest, then she became Female Rambo Galore? Meh.. All in all, s'good though.. OOC but close enough..

say it isn't so (lol). personally, i'm a bit confused. is she in the bat cave or what? also, ella seems a little bit confused, but she normally isn't. a little out of character. overall, pretty good. try and tell more about what's going on, make it less confusing.

I can't wait to read more of your stuff

intersting, cant' wait to see what happens next

OOH, I can't wait for more of your story, I really enjoy all the drama, and good writing, please keep writing so I can keep reading.

okay...please add more soon

Gr you and your short chaps

interesting, a little wierd because of the whole Micheal Jackson impersonator, but whatever. can't wait to find out what happens next, keep writing.

i love the story it is really good u should defenitly continue with it.

uhm, just one question: How is Steph gonna find Melly without dying first? Chest wounds tend to kill you if left untreated, but hey, if you found away to keep her alive, then you go girl.

Well, people, I know getting shot in the chest would make you pass out (though not EXACTLY instantly, but pretty soon), but that part is meant to make you think. You see, what if it was whatever one of those fake bullets are called? What if she wasn't shot DIRECTLY in the chest, just got her chest grazed? What if God turned his favour back towards her? I am not going to tell you why, you'll just have to keep thinking. Muhuahaha!

very interesting. it was kind of confusing because at first it was kind of light, then got really seroius (kidnapping). i can't believe she hung up on ranger. good for her. keep writing.