Awe, how beautiful for both of them. Can't wt for the rest of the girls to show up.

This is one great fic. Who knew one could make an OC and still be human, bravo! C'est Parfeit indeed.

You are going to continue this right?

And again, I am amazed.

It was really enjoyable to read both chapters posted so far. I'd like to see the remaining ten as soon as possible, but because the first two were so good, I'm willing to be patient :D.

Something this good is definitely worth waiting for T_T

Awesome idea! MORE PLEASE!

You HAVE got to keep going this. This chapter was like amazing!! I love the idea you have and the way you use words is like just awsome. Your doing a great job, keep going.

this was a really good idea. how'd you come up with it? it's so unique! chapter two was really sad though. you conveyed the emotions pretty accurately as far as i can tell. keep writing!

I sensed no angst, but I did almost cry. Very deep. Very emotional. Meant to be read in silence, alone. Another brilliant success.

Wow! ^_^ That was really pretty! I mean like really it was awsome. Can not wait for you to write more. I love how...just wow! ^_^ Amazing Job!!

~Sam

Great concept. Original. I love the first one, and I can't wait for more. Please consider this incentive to continue.