Reviews for Ghost in the Shell: Sakuhen

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naira 2007-10-18 ch 2, anon.	abuseit was acually really good and i understand the type of writers block you hade i've hade it myself and for having it this was very well written and interesting i love how you have the characters but one negative thing you spelled batou name wrong i gave you the currect spelling of it in the line above but besides theat it was great and absolutly loved it and would like to now if you have anymore works on fafiction.
Jjaro 2007-08-17 ch 3,	abuseYour story seems very well structured. I'm liking it a lot. Very good cliffhanger at the end too. Reading through the last three chapters, im findign Batou's and togusa's arguements hilarious. It's something they would do, but i dont know how often. There is only one thing i found that i didn't like in this. Batou called the major 'Motoko'. Sure it's her real name but no one ever calls her that without risk of being yelled at. Batou didn't even get away with a cold stare, so that's slightly out of character. The chapter lengths are reasonable and you're entertaining to read. Sorry, i dont have a name i could give you. My advice would be just to find a pretty common name for him. I hope to see another chapter soon.
JillTheCrazy1 2007-06-18 ch 1,	abuseI figure you like CSI or something, because this is as well thought out as one of those shows. Nice job, keep going! Jilly-Bean
bloo-96 2007-04-26 ch 1, anon.	abusecool, i liked it! (I'm a man of few words)
lostinmymind16 2007-04-21 ch 3,	abusehey great story. hope you update soon.
Anise 2007-04-09 ch 3, anon.	abuseIt's been forever since I've looked for stories here so to find a good mystery was a nice surprise. I like that you're taking your time developing the story and are paying attention to the details, I think things like that can help make a story really interesting. As for the names you didn't specify if you wanted a japanese name or not, something like Kai while it's japanese could actually be from anywhere. Really just think of all the animes you watch and then take two different names and pair them together like, Kai Hayate or Tetsuya Iwaki. I'm sure you'll figure something out and I look forward to seeing what happens next, I just hope I won't have to wait 6 months for an update! :)
Evil Riggs 2007-04-03 ch 3,	abuseContinues to be interesting. Proceed.
Evil Riggs 2007-04-03 ch 2,	abuseBwahaha. Poor Battou. Good stuff!
Evil Riggs 2007-04-03 ch 1,	abuseI endorse this product and/or service.
Mayhem21 2007-04-02 ch 3,	abuseI like this, a lot. ^_^ I only recently purchased season one of GitS, so finding a great story like this is just icing on the cake. As for names...well, I like looking for one's with a meaning that fits the character. Try - that's an amazing website. A few names: Tane, Armel, Hector or Leander? Those have pretty good meanings. Also, I'm pretty good with Greek mythology. Let me know if I can help! Best of luck with the next chapter! -Ptath
RhyssaFireheart 2007-03-30 ch 3,	abuseGreat story so far, I'm enjoying it. Can't help with any victim names though; I have enough problems thinking them up for my own stories.
Alchemic Goddess 2007-03-29 ch 2,	abuseI think its good but you spelled batu wrong. I thing. Im really sorry if im wrong. kk
Caddris 2007-03-28 ch 1,	abuseThis is great so far. I love the dynamic between Togusa and Bateau. Your writing style is also really nice; you have a nice balance between description and action. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
Genarog 2007-03-27 ch 2,	abuseReally good story, I like it very much!! Please keep up the good work
Silver Affection 2006-10-21 ch 2,	abuseI'm really loving this! PLEASE FINISH IT! I GOTTA KNOW HOW IT ENDS!

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