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Bringer Of Fears 2008-04-29 . chapter 11
I just read through the entire story and it's very good and interesting.
Though I see that the last update was last year.
Don't abandon this story, I hope to see another update soon.
pride1289 2007-12-03 . chapter 11
ep! I have to go to bed now!! why did it have to end! I dont wanna go to bed! Well i have 2 go now.
CONTINUE SOON PLZ!!
pride1289 2007-12-02 . chapter 2
Yes. Thank you sephiroth for killing off Aeris!
Now i am going to go ahead and read the next chapter!
pride1289 2007-12-02 . chapter 1
I like it so far. is Seph gunna be Vinnies son in this? PLEASE!
Crescent-Moon-Love 2007-05-18 . chapter 11
Nice...update soon!!
Crescent-Moon-Love 2007-05-18 . chapter 6
umm...it seems like all Vincent is doing latly is getting hurt...poor him
Crescent-Moon-Love 2007-05-18 . chapter 4
umm...ouch...
Crescent-Moon-Love 2007-05-18 . chapter 3
That was pretty funny! If I was watching Reno do that I'd be laughing my ass off!!
Crescent-Moon-Love 2007-05-17 . chapter 2
I think that was longer then the first chapter...How did you do all this? I still have nine more chapters to go and if it's as long as these ones I have a lot to read! But anyways on to the next chap!
Crescent-Moon-Love 2007-05-17 . chapter 1
Wow...what a long chapter! Must have had fun with this one.
Kikino 2007-04-01 . chapter 11
Congrats with the new friends and love. It's always good to make new friends. Your apology is accepted. I completely understand what you might be going through. I'm sorry not being able to review sooner. My dearest apologies for that.

Great chapter, I really, really enjoyed it. Your descriptions to the kimonos were beautiful. I enjoyed every bit of it. I don't think I've read better details for clothing like that. I knew you weren't going to let Vincent wear one. If you did, I think I would have killed you. Lol. I'm not surprised Sephiroth didn't wear one either.

I do want to point out one mistake though. In the beginning you said the festival heppens every five years, but Yuffie said it was every seven. I can't wait until the next chapter.

What does Genisis and Omega have planned? What is their next move? I'll keep reading and find out. I won't give up on your story, so don't give up on us, okay? Arigato!

Kikino
Kikino 2006-10-13 . chapter 10
Aw. I really liked this chapter! It was so sweet! When you were talking about Sephiroth's dream, at first, I thought it was Vincent's. But, when you said "father" and "mako" I'm like, hm...Cloud? No, wait! Sephiroth! Duh! I then slapped myself for my own stupidity. I really liked Vincent's dream. Is it forshadowing there? Hm. I wonder. Well, I guess I'll seen soon, hopefully. I'm glad to be reading your story. It's an excellent story. Arigato! ^-^

Kikino
Blindfolded Angel 2006-10-13 . chapter 10
TT_TT You are alive! -huggles you- I was so afraid you were gonna stop writing! -pokes you- Never scare me like that again! Ya didn't even write me to tell me if you were ever gonn update again or not!

Amazing chapter. I liked it alot. The plot is slowly unraveling, and the speed of the story is nice and relaxing, easing ya through it so it makes it all the more fun to read. I really wanna know more details about what the organization is up to and I also wanna know what ya plan on doing with Vincent.

You improved again. I feel as though your style changes every time you write. You're getting a lot better. I can see it. -nod nod nod-

-pokes you- YOU BETTER UPDATE AGAIN AND SOON! Or I shall through sporks of inspiration and anti-procastination at you!

-Spazzy the Blindfolded Angel
Kikino 2006-10-06 . chapter 9
Finally, I can review! I've been reading your story. And I'd like to say...I LOVE IT! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! I loved the story from the very beginning. It wasn't until the last chapter until I think I saw the whole thing unfold. I've been reading your story a chapter a day. Sometimes half a chapter. I would have finished reading it earlier, but I've been busy and it sucks! I wish I could have been with you at the very beginning! I would be reviewing every chapter! I'll tell my friends about your story. None of them have accounts though. I just send them the URL of a story that I think they'd like and they'd read, and(maybe) review if they liked it. If I get three of my friends to review to your story, will you update soon? Pretty please!?!?!? I'm really liking your story to death! I'll review to every chapter after this one, I promise! And I never break a promise!

I've seen you've been doing your story late at night. I'm surprised. When I do something like that, I'd be having so many typos. You're doing a great job with that. You're a great author too! I love the use of words you use! I'm so jelous! I wish I could write like you!

I'm going to kill that Leo guy! How dare he embarras Vincent like that! And Reno, *Laughs.* that part when he found the bra! Ahahahaha! I couldn't stop laughing! That was great.

And I liked how in the last chapter you did that thing with Vice and Weiss. Yeah, it drives me nuts too. Lol. I know the Weiss thing through my favorite anime. It's called Weiss Kreuz(Knighthunters) and goes by White Cross. Great anime. OMI ROCKS!

I guess I'll let you go. Don't you dare quit wrighing this story! I hope this review was good enough for you to update soon. Arigato! ^-^

Kikino

P.S. If it wasn't good enough, then if I said I was Blindfolded Angel would you still update soon? If so, then...my name is now Blindfolded Angel. But you can call me Kikino.
Blindfolded Angel 2006-09-11 . chapter 9
Why have them attack me? WHY?!?! TT.TT ...-looks around- OMG! I have explanations I SWEAR! First of all, I did review for chapter 8 -nod nod nod- I didn't know that I didn't log in though...Its says anon...whatever the word is but I signed with my name! Spazzy! Ya can check for yourself! I did!

Next, The reason I haven't reviewed 'til now is I had to work last night! I'm a lifeguard and my indoor pool I work at stays open late! I didn't get a chance to get online last night and just got home from work at 9 tonight! I nearly danced around my house when I saw ya updated! I was SO Happy! I was actually thinking about your story the other day! I was afraid you stopped writing! I was so afraid! I'm so happy you're still writing!

Now...for my review. -dances around, flailing with happiness- IT WAS AWESOME! I wanna know more about Vinnie and his Uncle! I wanna know about how Zack is really gone show up in this fic and I wanna know about Aeris and I wanna know so many things! Like how Sephiroth is gonna handle all his memories and who's death was it that Vincent smelled?!?!?! GAH! I WANNA KNOW! You gotta update soon! -spazzes out- SOON! I can't wait! I love yor story, I always enjoy reading what ya come up with next for this plot!

Like always your writing style keeps improving, even if you don't seem to notice and each chapter gets better and better! And you have 23 reviews! I bet the others are gonna go around spreading the word and I swear everyone will be reading this soon! God you have so much talent as a writer and I love the way you keep everyone in character and keep the plot smooth and interesting! Especially with Seph since he has to go through the whole humanity thing but you haven't made him loose his pride or dignity! I was so happy about that!

I can't wait for the next chapter to come! Hopefully I won't have work when ya update so I can read and review ASAP! I don't want ya to stop writing so never give up hope! -poke poke poke- So get writing on the next chapter Charan-Amaya! NOW! -cackles and then glomps ya- Make sure you update soon, 'kay?

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