 Bitter-Sweet-ish 2009-10-23 . chapter 1Wow! Can't wait to read more. I haven't finished reading the manga yet, so is this Masao a real person in the manga? |
 Huilisti 2009-09-23 . chapter 1 This seems promising... A quite mysterious start for a fic! I'll keep on reading! |
 SilverxWolf 2008-09-14 . chapter 43Cute! |
 loretta537 2008-07-22 . chapter 50this was an interesting story, and i read it straight through from begining to end in just a few hours. |
 ReplicaRiku'sgirl 2008-07-21 . chapter 28About your title, when the "ji" and small "ya" are together, you drop the "i" and "y". Which makes it "ja". I have never seen it written like that before. The only other form is "jiya". Can you please show me sometime what it looks like? |
 Ichira-sama 2008-06-01 . chapter 50 Hi, Ichira here..am just not logged in. This story was a blast to read and I will definitely look forward to your future Loveless stories, but I won't just read your loveless stuff. You already know I read your other works too! God bless you! |
 CruelLove 2008-05-28 . chapter 50 Another end to another great story! |
 Forever A Mystery 2008-05-25 . chapter 50 The end? T_T The closure could have been a wee bit better in my opinion, but this is still a good story. |
 Tater Tots 2008-05-22 . chapter 50*cries* NU it can't be finished! TTATT
*sad sigh* oh well. It was a very good story! I'm very glad that I read it :3
Thank you for taking the time to write it!!
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 Psycho Sombrero 2008-05-19 . chapter 1I'm interesting, but 50 ** chapters?!? this'll take me forever to read! oh well. still good, still good. |
 Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitten 2008-05-16 . chapter 50ugh... xD? |
 Kakki 2008-05-16 . chapter 50Kakki here!
It's over? Already? Aw...
That fouloldron person was a bit harsh on you, but maybe you're taking that person's review as a good one? I hope you are, because if not, it sounds downright mean. I'll admit that your characterization is loose, but maybe you wrote it like that on purpose. I understood everything. Just remember that all kinds of people read a story in different ways. I've read stories where the stuff was so hard to understand I thought my head was going to explode! But I suppose that was the author's style. I will look forward to your future stories! |
 fouloldron 2008-05-16 . chapter 50The characterization was fairly poor. This was mainly a result of the poor writing style which managed to be convoluted without actually giving any secure characterization or plot points.
For the most part I felt like I was getting glimpses of plot points but even though I plugged through the whole 50 chapters I still feel like I've only read every 10th line because the story is so poorly developed and choppy.
There needs to be actual explanation, or even a complete basic outlining, of ideas and characters so the the read has at least some vague idea of what's going on. |
 kabelly 2008-05-16 . chapter 50That ended so good! I'm sad its over but I really enjoyed reading it. You have some great talent, and if you write another story I cant wait to read it! Great job! I still can't believe its over. |
 Kaze Kimizu 2008-05-16 . chapter 50Wow, I can't believe it's over! I really loved this story, and I anticipate any other fics you might do in the future. You really put a lot of effort into shaping the personalities of your characters. |