 BookGoddess-cat 2006-06-16 . chapter 1Wow...um, wow. When I started reading this I didn't expect much from a one chapter story, but this was very close to amazing. It was subtle, not too wordy. Quiet, but not silent. It was quite...wonderful. I also loved the ending.
You don't have to continue a story after this chapter, for the chapter was great in itself, but a following story would only add to it. Keep writing!
-Lina |