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| SleepySaiyan 2008-06-11 ch 1,  | abuseamazing story well done! lust's and scar's characters were perfect...and uh...well lust/scar is such a cute pairing lol could u make a sequel to this story or maybe do u think it wouldn't work? cuz i think it would be awesome ;D |
| Kenkaya 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseThis was an absolutely beautiful piece! I loved your descriptions of depression-era Berlin, of Lust's new life, and the people in it. Very vivid. The OCs were very believable too. I also like how you managed to fit the story in within the context of the movie at the end. It had a nice content feel to it that the movie itself was lacking, IMO. Scar's slow warming-up toward Lust was handled superbly as well and the line where he tells her that he sees her as her own person now was just lovely. Overall, great story and I'll definitely look forward to more from you. Happy writing! |
| Toonces 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely loved it. You're characterizations were great. Fritzi was getting on my nerves, too. It was so very well written and I loved how you expressed Lust and Scar's love for each other without them actually kissing or having sex. It made that much more special somehow. Great job! I hope to read more, even longer Scar and Lust from you in the future. :) There's not much of it around. |
| ryella 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseIts a very nice story. Lust is very in character, so is Scar, and it was very entertaning to read. Thank you |
| Tzarista 2007-03-20 ch 1, | abusegreat story |
| LuciousLadyLucius 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseAw man that was amazing you need to write a sequal, seriously just anything about scar and lust's relationship i'll review it lolz Das x |
| Ceirwy 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abuseAmazing story. Lusts' point of view is so rich and dramatic and your story idea is fresh and original. Love it! |