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l.
2008-04-09
ch 6, anon.
abuseLoved it, loved it, loved it! I'm hoping that there will be more to follow. I really hope to see further updates on this fic and your other wonderful ones.
bel535672
2007-06-02
ch 6,
abuseI love it...Lee is just so wonderful..I feel for Sam but in times of crisis you always turn to the one you reall love..I am so looking forward to the next chapter...
kilcon9
2007-05-30
ch 6, anon.
abuseI'm in LOVE. Please, Please, I am begging you to continue this story (and your others which I have also read). I look forward to the next installment. I am asumming that Kara doesn't know that her overies are gone or else her dreams of children would be more painfull. I would love to see a scene between her an Anders as well. Anyway, thanks for the great story...hope to see more soon.
cheers,
Kilcon9
dillon2
2007-03-13
ch 6,
abuseI just found this story and LOVE it! Your portrayal(badspelling#%$@) of Kara and Lee is...wow. More Kara/Lee goodness soon please!!
Can't wait for your next update!
starbuck042786
2007-02-20
ch 6,
abusePoor Kara... :-( I love how Lee is sticking with her and is one of the few who could really see through her attempts at being 'well' again.

I cannot wait to see this updated!
FemmePhantom
2007-02-12
ch 6,
abuseI just found this story and read all your chaps, and let me tell you, well done. I actually got a little teary while reading some of them. And I think that a broken Starbuck, has to be about the scariest thing the for the fleet to see. I love your story and I can't wait to read what happens next. ^Femme

p.s. My condolences on your laptop. Mine died a few months ago as well (short in the motherboard), so I know EXACTLY how you feel.
taff
2007-01-28
ch 6,
abuseHi Inara84, I don't think I've ever reviewed your story before and for the life of me think why not. I love this story. I think that your portayal of Starbuck as brokenis very realistic - almost a little too for comfort occasionally but that is a sign of good writing. Anyway I have babbled for too long so just a last thank you for updating!
RebleQueen
2007-01-28
ch 6,
abuseI am truly enjoying this story. I am a solid Apollo/Starbuck fan and this story has me rivetted. Please write more soon.
CrazyLikeaFox
2007-01-18
ch 6,
abuseI really enjoyed this latest chapter and could almost cry from the dreams that Kara had of her and Lee's child. Loved the scene with Anders though I do feel a little sorry for the guy.
romeoharvey
2007-01-18
ch 6,
abuseWonderful chapter.

I'm sure I'll like the story anyways, but in coming chapters, could you please not make Kara totally ingnore Sam?

Even if Dee was never married to Lee in this story, do you plan to atleast bring her up? Just a question, I'm not trying to tell you how to write your fic or anything.

Please try and have chapter 7 posted soon. :)
romeoharvey
2007-01-18
ch 5,
abuseThanks very much for posting a new chapter! :)

Very good continuation, I had to re-read the last chapter and I couldn't even tell you took a four month long break from this.

Hope you find the opportunity to get away from real life often enough to update.
hp/hg
2007-01-17
ch 6, anon.
abusethis was a really good chapter. i would just like some more one on one time with lee and kara.
Maevenly
2007-01-17
ch 6,
abuseWHOHO!!

This chapter was so fab! It was dark, what the Cylons inflicted on Kara was horrible, but the faintest glimmers of hope that you sparingly dabbed in just the right places had my heart beaming.

This is very, very well crafted! THANK YOU! Needless to say, I made sure checked the box that read: Story Alert list!

Maevenly
dgainey2003
2007-01-17
ch 6,
abuseOh what can I say except that I loved it. Kara's fantasy life is so touching and so true to who they are if they would just let themselves be. If only you could give them a baby. I know it's probably not possible since the cylons took her ovaries but maybe you could think of some way. I love that Lee, Helo and Sharon are the only ones who seem to understand her. I believe that Adama would be slightly out of touch with many parts of who she is. The Lee/Kara interaction was great. The fact that she calms down and responds quicker to him is how is should be. They are Apollo/Starbuck afterall. You have done a wonderful job on showing us the foundation of their relationship is love and trust.
Keep up the good work and I look for to chapte 6 of Who are we.
Jena
2007-01-17
ch 6, anon.
abuseI love this fic. You've gone to another level by included the repercussions of torture and I love reading stories that take issues and bring them to the forefront. Keep up the wonderful work and update soon.
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