What a truly stellar story! Of all of the Pretender fics I have read over the past couple of days, this is the first one where I can truly say ... Awesome! Your grasp on the characters, their minds, their mannerisms, heck, even the way you write a scene, is really refreshing.

I don't feel like I've wandered into fanfiction here. I feel like its a continuation of the series, and one I would be more than happy to watch over and over. I feel comfortable in your story. You don't make me feel like a voyeur in the shadows ... Thanks!

Thanks for sharing

GK

Bravo. One of the rare Pretender Fics that are convincing in story and character.

I really liked it and have enjoyed readin it. Kudos for this pretty J/MP jewel.

Very Good story, I enjoyed it.
Very well written and organized, I haven't seen many stories like this in a long time.

Good work.

Hey!!

I just discoverd this fic (althought don't understand how i managed to miss it in the first place! hehehe). You are such a brilliant writer, and I really enjoyed the 'creativity' of the plotline, although that is your usual MO. Thanks for the great read :D.

thank you for cleaning up the ending .at the last reading of chapter 3 i thought, oh no. That was to cruel. but you more than made up for ti here. having her find Jarod, having her and him have the blow up, and then having them reconcile, was classica and it worked. Toched my heart and I'd love to see an epilogue. Just a request, mind you

AH! I LOVE IT! You left me dying with the third chapter because I was afraid you might actually end it there. But this chapter completely makes up for the cruelty of leading me to believe that. haha. Very good story. The ending was perfect. Again, I love it!

Fantastic fic! I especially love the end!

beautiful

Thank you, thank you, thank you. What a wonderfully sweet epilogue - satisfied my romantic heart no end !! As always, your writing is excellent - your characterisation and dialogue are insightful and true to the show. Another wonderful addition to your back catalogue. I look forward to the next story from you...

>“What a shame,” she said absently. “I’ll have to send him a card. Maybe Hallmark has one that is appropriate. Do they make a ‘Sorry your den of torture has been torched’ card?”<

haha, no card selection is complete without one of those! :D

I liked it :)

Hi Imag1ne,

Bravo! Loved your story and the ending. Okay,I'm a sucker for happy endings, but you did an outstanding job with each character and the story was Amazing. Looking forward to your next story and the continuation of Survival II. Hint hint.
You're very gifted as a writer and it is always a delight to see a story from you.
Mercy

Now, this is an ending! Thanks so much for it. Sydney, Broots, and MP had been searching and searching for J - glad for that. What a horrible place Raines and Lyle had created to keep and torture J. How J can be good, pure, and gentle is beyond me - but I am glad that he is! It took a while, but Jarod (with Sydney's help) understand the "whole" of what had happened. Glad that he was able to find MP and Aaron at Ben's. Happy ever after - and together - is exactly what J and MP need and deserve. Thanks so much for chapter 4 - the world somehow seems right again. Keep writing and sharing with us. Thanks.

I'm still not sure if I like/understand/beilieve the reasons for Parker's betrayal; however, I do like the way the story ended for all of them!

Thanks for chapter 4,what a great story as always.Hope to read more from our other stories soon. Julie

Sure is. I love this chapter and I am very glad you wrote it. This end was far much better. Beautiful story.