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CaptainTish
2006-08-29 . chapter 6
That was an awesome ending to a great story.

I liked the thinking about the possibility of them having kids some day. "Lite beer is for pansies" lol.

I also liked the game of hide-and-seek, Crocodile Hunter style. I know I read a story some time about that, was it by you? I don't remember.

Great job. I would like to see a sequel to this. Well, I look forward to seeing whatever you come up with!
Brimseye
2006-08-28 . chapter 6
hey Dizi, nice story there...:) i love how it ended! You do the writing community proud! I am compleatly 100% satisfyed! love your style please keep writing always and u can count on me to review! all the best wishes..

B :)
B Oots
2006-08-23 . chapter 6
I really enjoyed the story. I hope you do write a sequel.
I hope you the best of luck.
Brimseye
2006-08-15 . chapter 5
very very tastfuly done! Great job! your a great writer! keep up the wonderful story telling i will be sad when this is all done! its been such a good story!
Mikita
2006-08-10 . chapter 5
Dizi: This chapter was... Perfect. :) Thanks.
amy77
2006-08-10 . chapter 5
wow, next chapter is the last chapter? I'm excited but also sad...I'll miss this story. It's really good.
CaptainTish
2006-08-09 . chapter 5
Well, it seems like the two of them have finally cleared the air. Communication is key to a good relationship.

I was a little confused by this part -- "...the other. I hadn't even gotten to that part when he went pale. Yeah, he'd been in the base, and I wanted to die when they left without me, but I also felt like I'd been saving the best part of me when they got out. It was a victory that would have been tainted if I had told him the rest." Maybe it's cause I haven't read the comics, but I have no idea what you're talking about.

Good chapter, keep it up! Looking forward to getting Wolvie's Last Word!
B Oots
2006-08-09 . chapter 5
I am really enjoying the story. Please update soon, so I can read, what Logan has to say to finish the story.
amy77
2006-08-05 . chapter 4
hurrah, that was great. I really enjoyed that chapter and can't wait for the next chapter. I don't know which I like more the wolvie pov chapters or the jubilee pov chapters...they're both soo good.
CaptainTish
2006-07-30 . chapter 4
Good chapter. So Wolverine figured out what he was doing wrong. Very good.

"I'm a man and make mistakes on a regular basis." -L. O. L.!
Brimseye
2006-07-29 . chapter 4
aw soo good! I love this story! keep up the great work!
Mikita
2006-07-27 . chapter 4
I'm thrilled to see you're finally writing this story... I was waiting for it! And so far it was worth it. ;) Keep up the good work, ok?
B Oots
2006-07-26 . chapter 4
I am really enjoying the story. Please update soon, so I can read, Jubilee's POV of the fight and where it goes from there?
amy77
2006-07-16 . chapter 3
aw I loved that chapter...'beautiful and terrifying. kinda like my wolvie' that was great. I can't wait for wolvie pov...I'm very excited!
Brimseye
2006-07-14 . chapter 3
(throws money for you) bravo! Please keep it up i love the internal dialoge and how each character views problems differently how wolvie is such a guy and Jubes kinda wont let a subject go until she compleatly chews through it.. :) good job Dizi! cant wait for your next chapter! xoxox
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