I like the part about Darcy and Riven. It was cute. Darcy derserves it too anyway.

Cool, I am on chapter 3 now.

What a sad ending :(

good story though

Just finished this last night. What can I say?

Well, first of all thank you for finishing this. We needed the closure.

Second, not every story can have a fairy-tale ending. Life isn't fair, and some story's reflect that.

This is one story that I won't be forgetting for a long time, if ever...

A good, if dark, chapter.

Good to see you continuing this story, looking forward to more.

*sigh* finally. no more sadness. except for icy. she's not very happy. what's her fix gonna be?

that...bitch. TECNA MUST DIE! *forms an angry mob* KILL THE LITTLE CYBORG!

YAY! HAPPYNESS AT LAST! *sigh* okay, had to get that out of my system. Hope you can update soon!

It just keeps getting sadder. WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME? *wipes away tears* Anyway, hope you can update soon.

This story is really interesting - the whole swapped roles idea? Keep it coming, please.

aww, poor stormy. tecna's gonna get bitch slapped, i just know it.

XD XD XD XD XD This is a great story hope you can update soon.

hehe da verhaal is leuk :d eens iets anders :d goe bezig!

It was cool. Good!Stormy is cute. I liked how she's random, just like Evil!Stormy. And Evil!Flora is cool.

nice. Quick question: Is Flora playing Stormy, or is this truly a romantic story?

Just reviewing for fun. I don't know what to say, cause I skipped the F/S, playtime(if ya now what I mean) thing. _ Other than that it was... I give up. ASorry I can't think of what to say.