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| Ikaru Sentinal 2008-05-17 ch 1,  | abuseI really, really loved this. Nemu is adorable. Are you going to add a sequel? I really hope you will. |
| TawakeNix 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseI think that was fairly sweet~ :'D |
| XENO Prototype 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseAww... |
| RinUtari 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was wonderfully written. I've always wondered how Nemu felt about things, and the way you put it was as close as I could get (does that make sense? Sorry) Anyway, you're an amazing author, and I hope you make it big in life. -Rin P.S I read your profile, and I think it's cute that you like shojo! |
| Dreaming One 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuseWow. That's kind of heavy. I like it! |
| crazyarsonist 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuseNEMU IS MY FAVORITE CHARACTER AND THIS IS MY FAVORITE FIC ABOUT HER. YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE STUFF LIKE THIS COS YOU ALMOST MADE ME CRY WITH THIS ONE...and I don't cry very often too. Great job! |
| Final Kaenboshi 2007-04-29 ch 1, | abuseWhoa. This is amazingly accurate portrayal of their relationship. You have the kudos of this Kurotsuchitard. |
| KaRisa-Hime 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abusepOor Nemu sOme time i fell pity for her ,, good story like it |
| magicsmith 2006-12-30 ch 1, | abuseAn interesting character study. It also adds some background. Good work. |
| Hassun 2006-12-17 ch 1, | abuseNice story! It's interesting to see a more in depth view of Mayuri. A reason for the wickedness would certainly deepen his character. |
| Daisa 2006-11-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw, that's so sweet. A lot of people dislike Mayuri, but I like him. His relationship with Nemu's a bit messed up, but it's a lovely story nonetheless. |
| alliedoll 2006-09-23 ch 1, | abusevery disturbing. she has been treated so poorly, yet she loves him so much. it bugs me. very good portrayal of the character relationship though. and his reaction was accurate as well. |
| The guy who never was 2006-07-10 ch 1, | abuseVery touching and well written, and the only spelling mistakes were words not spaced. Good job. |
| NutBuster 2006-06-30 ch 1, | abuseOh my~ This was so sweet of Mayuri, to take the letter. There's hope for Mayuri to become kinder. At least, to show his side more often to Nemu. Very lovable. :D |
| cookiekitten 2006-06-18 ch 1, anon. | abusethat's touching... nice job! |