 BleachedShadow 2009-10-04 . chapter 4This fic is really interesting! :D I can't wait to see more! ^^ |
 Drackner Clawrus 2009-01-21 . chapter 4This was interesting, I find a few parts slightly un realistic like reparing the vocal cords but it seems to work quite well. Hope you update oneday. 8/10 for the fic. |
 V956970 2008-08-09 . chapter 1Love it! |
 LongLiveOlivera4ever 2008-04-04 . chapter 1Amazing idea! That was totally kick-**! |
 Amiaoi 2008-02-22 . chapter 1If this was a fanfiction of Resident Evil the third movie, he'd be the main character. You know, with them searching for a was to control the zombies. |
 Meethrill 2007-12-27 . chapter 4Marvellous, More, Please! |
 Gijinka Renamon 2007-09-23 . chapter 4Interesting. Please continue. |
 Alastor256 2007-08-19 . chapter 4This is a great story i hope you keep on writing it cant wait to see more |
 FrontlineChaos 2007-07-04 . chapter 3Uh... Why not let the mad scientists pop out earlier? |
 jamar 2007-04-19 . chapter 3I really like the story so far, especially the backstory you provided for this guy. I do hope you'll update again soon. |
 REDFIELD-017 2007-04-05 . chapter 1that was funny as hell! |
 Noc007 2006-06-21 . chapter 1Interesting, never thought a zombie actually though while being a... well... zombie. Nonetheless, I liked this. Great Job. |
 Reko Reborn 2006-06-20 . chapter 1VERY NICE!
I was suprissed, this was very, VERY good.
It is a very good concept, an intelligent zombie trying to avoid eating people, wanting to maintain his humanity as much as he can, while being slightly humorious.
Yet it is one that is rarely properly executed, and i say that you should continue it, flush out the life of Travis, how is he killed? How does he maintain humanity? What does he think of all of this?
And how does his "life" progress from this point?
You have something good here, go with it! |
 La Mouette Lunaire 2006-06-17 . chapter 1Wait, Dom Deluise? Uhm, anyway... ^^
Yeah, I like the idea lots, though the way you wrote it kinda seemed like a mixture between serious and fun which wasn't ideal in my opinion. I don't know if you did this on purpose, if it just turned out this way or if that's just how I see it - for example, the thing about his head. It's head off - dead again. It's a... trademark. I just can't imagine zombies without the head off thing. Then again I can but it reminds me too much of Return of the Living Dead Part II so that's why I was probably thinking of slapstick.
And Nicholai really turned out A BIT too nice. I mean, he shoots r e a l p e o p l e without hesitation, let alone zombies. He probably wouldn't even have remembered that he'd seen Travis before and just blasted him away on sight. At least that's how I imagined him to be.
Other than that: Love. Continue! ^^ |