I'd give it a...
C minus?

I'm known for being too cheery...and besides, I'm not scared because there was not description of how all the people were killed.

If there was and if I was listening to the right kind of music, maybe'd I would be even lucky to get to my room, late at night without getting scared. :-l

Why? Because I'm weird like that!..Deal with it. :->,

IceFlake 77

PS: do I sound too much like a judge?

I'd go with a B. It was well written but... I didn't find it scary in my opinion. ^^;; There's always a room for improvement though. I'd probably be freaking if everyone in the house was asleep but now right now. :/
or maybe I was listening to the wrong song. =.=;;
It's was too cheery.

A+ for sure! It's one of the best Gluttony Fanfics i've read on here. Nice and grusome, good suspence. Nicely done!

A+ I LOVED IT! I I relly liked the way you wrote this.