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| foxy cat13 2008-07-06 ch 11,  | abuseyou made cloud a neville replacement... |
| Taeniaea 2007-12-09 ch 11, | abuseGreat Story!! |
| lephistos 2007-12-08 ch 11, | abuseWhat have you done with Cloud. Normally he is totally bad-ass, but you've made him a loser. |
| Helwi 2007-10-22 ch 11, | abuseHey, I can't help but comment this one even thought there is no Red :p It's really a cute AU x-over. I like the way you kept the same atmosphere as the first book. Aslo, the fact that you made the FF crew progressing in a parallel story is not a bad option either. Nice little touch of humor too. "you went grey early." :)) I suppose the way the story is treated will change along the books. If so,I guess Cloud's story will end up changing the outcoming of the original storyline. Up to second year now then. :) |
| Redclaw5 2007-05-06 ch 4, | abuse...I'm sorry, but to the point that I just read its been a little OCC...everyone's just...11-yr-old-ish and Cloud's too much like Nevile... -.- |
| Lady Valtaya 2007-02-02 ch 11, | abuseLOL. I don't know what possessed me to read this, but I'm glad I did. It was really cute! Great job. |
| ichiwings 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I love crosses. I am glad you picked to do this one. |
| KariSkye 2006-09-23 ch 11, anon. | abuseWow, very interesting story. I can't wait till you get to the second one. OH and I really love the cameo that Sephiroth had, I hope you expand more on that in later stories. And you are keeping with a slight love triangle between Cloud, Aeris, and Tifa. Very final fantasy like and Harry Potter like! |
| KuroKumo14 2006-09-03 ch 11, | abuseYear the second!? YOU GO!! Chamber of Secrets! So, are you like going to continue until book seven? 0.o I'll be there reading! Great fic! Loved every bit! |
| Pseudo Epithet 2006-09-02 ch 11, | abuseInteresting story. But I have a question. Since Nibelheim is obviously there, does that mean that Midgar, Wutai, and all the other places are there as well? And what about the Shinra electric company, the SOLDIER program, Sephiroth, and JENOVA? Anyways, please continue. |
| TOWTWUKER 2006-09-02 ch 11, | abuseit better...] TOW |
| Twin Tails Speed 2006-09-02 ch 11, | abuseThis is a excellent chapter update. If this is the quality of the first year, I can't wait for the second year. |
| Lord Makura 2006-09-02 ch 11, | abuseyeah i can't wait for the next! |
| Angelicxox 2006-09-02 ch 11, | abuseGO CLOUD!! whoo hoo!! veryy good ending to an exellent story!! (dont mind my spelling, i havent been to school in two months so i forgot some things lolol) I loved it! I am looking forward to the sequel!! pleasee post it soon, okay?!? |
| Mako-Magic 2006-08-28 ch 10, | abusewow tifa, your comments about a pretty snuff box was completely in line with talking about evil and imagining things. aeris's story seemed put in well to me! mako |