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| MochaCocaFan 2008-07-22 ch 1,  | abuseJust..incredible |
| Kore-of-Myth 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseOh this is my favorite of your stories so far! Have you seen the movie Labyrinth? I couldn't help but see the similarities in here with an Evil!Jareth from it...Excuse my ramblings if you have no idea what I'm talking about... Again, this is really good - I like the manipulation, and the writing style of this one. Off to read Taint... Keep Writing! |
| kaaaleidoscope 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abusewow, im at a loss for words. that was beautiful. you are an insanley talented writer. i loved it. |
| reina 2007-12-25 ch 1, anon. | abusewow. that was amazingly deep and intricate and sinfully disturbing. i loved how everything was a paradox, it added brilliantly to the twisted effect. kudos to you. |
| Kari Nirvash 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abusefunky |
| MissBeccaBarista 2007-05-15 ch 1, | abusemy god that was beautiful. I was half expecting Violet to take him down like a sweet muffin.. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your works!! |
| NathaN210 2007-02-24 ch 1, | abuseWow, quite refreshing from most of the Incredibles fanfics, well, probably all of them. It certainly puts a different perspective on the meaning of pure and tainted. You weren't kidding when you said this was seriously twisted. |
| Harmonic Friction 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuseWell, that was astounding. Wonderfully written, great wording-- many theories and expressions so fitting. I love when unique pairings are described so well; so beautifully. I love that PIXAR inspires this kind of dark excitement-- I love it. |
| crzysheelf 2006-06-24 ch 1, | abuseWOW! Wonderful! Very dark, but with a possible hope at the end!! I loved it, glad to see you writing again!! |
| 009900990099 2006-06-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was...really good. A great study of the human mind. The end was a little confusing...I think you just got REALLY into the whole stream-of-conciousness aspect. There's nothing wrong with that, it just makes it harder to understand. -Rai |
| auri mynonys 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Twisted, yes; but beautiful. The characterizations, the way you get into each character's head... perfect. I really loved the ending when "death" and "rescue" are used oppositely - or, at least, what we would associate with their meanings are completely flipped. Death is rescue; rescue is death. A few minor spelling flaws, but those can be easily fixed. Other than that, absolutely perfect. |