Wow. So good. So good that it made me feel bad, lol. Write a follow on where he ditches the girl for Hermione!

OH MY GOD! THAT WAS SO UNBELIEVABLY GOOD! E! I LOVE YOUR STORIES!

aw this is so deep and heartbraking ( i can soo relate to this) its made me think that maybe the person i care about i should say something to them lol.

great story it would be good to continue something like it luvzx

OMG!

That was amazing, I've never read anything like that before and it brought tears to my eyes (in a good way) i can't believe that someone can put that much emotion into a piece of writing GREAT WORK!

Tears in my eyes
Wow you're good

As ever, the queen of tragedy, but I mean that in a good way. Your prowess as a writer is clearly advancing. You will be a better writer than me some day, because I can honestly say that a story that brings me to tears (or very close to) is superbly written, and I can count that number of stories on one hand.

So go on writing your heart-wrending tales and someday great authors will look at your youthful works and say, "She was an exceptional writer even as a young adult."

I really liked this! It was very dramatic and touching. I'm going to recc this over at The Anvil.

Wow! That was great! Poetic, yet touching and, well, fantastic :)

I loved it!

~carm~