What are you talking about? Apart from the boring, repetitive song, it's great.

You should expand on it.

The ending was good.

Oh. That was good.
That was really good.

Hehe, a brilliant one-shot.

interesting...
kinda sucks that jinx was broken... but good nonetheless...
adios for now...

This was good. When I was first reading this I thought it was Starfire... but it was too normal-ish sounding to be her, and I think it was you who hates StarRobin stuff... can't remember sorry. I thought it was good.

oh man that is so cruel it's like The Stone thing that happened in deception.