Holy... That makes me wanna... *pukes* Oh god!! Thats so--*pukes* MY GOD! SHADOW!! GET SCOURGE AND KICK HIS @$$! *pukes*

I feel so happy for them!

Poor Amy I hope Shadow saves her

HE SHALLTH NEVER COME BACK!

please

That was a good yet upsetting story. Way to work it around!

I don't know what that means, by the way.

YAYY!! Shadow won!!
I hope...

Scourge sucks bacon grease!

Oh no!

I read some of your reviews and I noticed that no one else said anything so I'm just going to go right ahead and say it; you're only fifteen and you're writing **? I honestly don't think this is the best choice for a topic in a story written by someone as young as you because most people your age don't have the needed experiances to write anything even remotely realistic. [And I say 'remotely realistic' because your sex scene involves two cartoon hedgehogs] I'll be honest, I've read things written by people your age that were a lot worse, so you're not a terrible writer, you just need to pick your topics more carefully. Someone who's barely learned the about the birds and bees in sex ed class or picked up a few tips from Cosmo mags or HBO late night, isn't someone who should be writing sex stories. I'm not trying to be rude or anything, but really girl, you didn't even have the rapist finish when he was ** the poor chick he had his paws on. To say someone was the best lay they ever had would presumably include having an ** with them-forced intercourse or not. Your character Scourge just got tired of thrusting and rolled off Amy. That's not how sex works unless you're lazy or have a malfunction with your naughty bits. Just work on some things, read a few books, or wait until your a little older and actually have some sex before you go writing about it, okay? And, let me once again say that I'm not insulting you, or flamming you, or anything like that. I'm just trying to give you some advice.

That was a good story, but I feel so bad for Amy. Reading that just made me want to save her. But the description was top notch! You rock!

POOR AMY! omg poor amy!! thx 4 writing cuz u really got through with the emotions and what not. im glad amy has someone like shadow to protect her. that is so sweet

i thought it was great im trying to write a shadowxangela (my carrie) but i cant make shadow be emo enough -_-

it was really sad that scourge raped amy- but good story! i love shadamy ficts! ^u^

This was like really good lol :)

Great story can't wait to read sequeal. But you forgot to space a few words but still a great storie

Whoo! Can't wait to read the sequel!