I love the way you've plotted this story out, haha. It really is hilarious! It's one of the stories I've read, that actually makes me laugh and grin in real life. XD

Papa FTW, yes? He's an amazing character you've come up with. (x And I love the Axel x Riku pairing. It's one of my favorites of the KH fandom, since I can't really get into those obvious Riku x Sora / Axel x Roxas pairings. I kinda wish I could though, since there's so many fics involving those. XD I do enjoy some Roxas x Sora twincest from time to time though, heh

I dunno if I've actually reviewed for this story yet... If I haven't, I can't believe it. I've reread this on my iTouch a while ago quite a few times! T T" It's too bad that you've been losing interest... but I hope you manage to finish your stories without too much of a hassle! You've brought this story pretty far! And I remember checking out your LJ, but I'm wondering if you've made any updates on there recently? I'll check it out again. XD

Good luck with college and inspiration!

Hi. I followed you here from the other site, hoping you'd have more. One chapter doesn't satisfy my need for your fics! You have to keep working on this! Now that I've spazzed, I'm going to go see what else you've got. This is one of my favourite stories so far. Make your fans happy! Come back and finish this! Pureez?

Uhm...

This is effing brilliant!

I hope you didn't die or something, because I want the rest of it!

PLEASE!

i don't know if you're ever going to update this story, but i just thought i'd say that i like this story. like, a lot. :) it's hilarious, and hot, and very well-written. so please, please, continue? :)?

Plz update! Im sad! :'(

Omg why havent u updated this hilarious story! Im mad!:'(

Quote: "Chapter six: In which Axel is a complete bastard."

-x-

Aw, isn't he always? xD (3 Axel)

So freakin funny it needs to be updated! I've never seen Selphie depicted as a sexual deviant but it's hilarious. Poor Riku, he probably should be in therapy by now.

I love this story! Please update soon!

I love the way you made Selphie so insane. Usually, she's an annoying and stupid little girl but here, she's AWESOME.

This fic is absolutely hilarious and I'm waiting for your next update.

This story is the funniest thing I've read in a long time. My throat is sore from laughing like a lunatic! I think Papa is my favorite character. That guy's too much...

Very nice work. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Guh. I am ded from the funny. And the angst. And the general cleverness and good character development. Thank you for writing such awesome fic! I hope there's more soon!

“Then what is the correct way, oh illustrious one?”what does the i word mean?

“The correct way, my sexually inept subject, is to be blunt about it.” what does/is a sexually inept subject?

UPDATE DAMN YOU!

I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! HURRY AND UPDATE DAMNIT!

i was all like "WHOT AXELRIKU ACTION!" and then i was all like "how dare that bastard do that to Riku.

WHOT GO AXIE! YOU TELL THE HIPPOCRATE!

XD! MY MUM ACTS LIKE THAT RIKU'S DAD I MEAN.

damn you. i held my breath when the door to the closet opened. i was praying not to get caught. adrenaline was being forced into my veins. i could feel my anger rise as Riku discovered the hicky. damn you for playing with my emotions! ... it was good. but now i'm worried about what Sora is going to think when he finds out. damn you! you got me into character, and now it's like this is happening to me!