its good so far

“'Stop being homicidal… I’ll give you a lollipop,' said Sandy, trying to hide her fear.
"Mr. Krabs immediately relaxed. 'A lollipop? If it’s free, I’ll take it!'”

ROFLMAO Great to see some light humor from you.

Everyone seems IC, except Pearl is a little too intense in this chapter. It's not too bothersome, though. I don't have a problem with SpongeBob's age, either. It makes sense because in the movie he made a big deal about proving he wasn't a kid anymore.

You definitely did the show justice. This could be an episode. I LOL'd when Patrick said “We could bring along this guy too!” and grabbed a random fish. So SpongeBobish.

Wow, this is one of the best SBSP fics I've ever read. Good plot, very in-character, and funny! Also the bit about Gary eating his meow was great, I could really picture that. Awesome fic!!

That was AWEsome! it deserves a spongebob episode lol...

^_^

-Jaeh xD

W0T AGAIN AGAIN! Loved the story...you have a great writing style, a talent that not alot of internet writers posess. ALSO, isn't "Krusty Crew" supposed to be "Krusty Krew"? Just a thought XD anyway, 10/10!
~Meg~

Awesome SpongeBob story! I loved every moment of it! :D

Innuendo. =D

That was great. The Chum Bucket is out of business once again. Sequel?

I'm really liking this story so far. Everyone seems so well in character that it almost seems like I'm reading an actual episode from the show. I love reading Patrick's dialogue. He sounds just like himself XD And Squidward, too! It's nice to finally see Spongebob with his license, even if things aren't going to smoothly for him right now ^^; Seeing him fail all the time was funny at first but now it's just boring :/

I'm curious to see what happens next! I can't wait for the next update!

hahahahahahahohmygod! That was just the best!! =D Really like spongebob! \o/
Patrick's attack (comeon stary boy! Its not as hard as it seems!), SpongeBob behaviour... especially in the speed part!:D I bet he'd get in more accidents driving five miles an hour ¬¬' and thats what undirectly happened, isnt it?? lol!!
well, hope he'll manage to drive, without hitting the car and also manage to dont let Plankton get more clients!
update!^^

I really hope you didn't discontinue this. This is the funniest (and in some points, very touching) and most accuruate SpongeBob fanfic I've read. I really want to see more.

Everyone sounds very in-character to me. SpongeBob's so funny when he freaks out ^_^

OMG! i totally loved these chapter it was SO funny! i loved it! was it me or did sandy seem just a little jelious when pearl was talking about peal was talking about dating spongebob?
LOL! could you put some sb/sandy in these story it would make me REALLY HAPPY :)

Thanxs,
your biggest fanfic fan,
Pixie Goodluck

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