 SilverKitsune013 2008-03-31 . chapter 1Zexion's answer is so sad. It makes me feel bad for the Nobodies. All they wanted was a heart. Well written! |
 Ocean's Nocturne of the COCA 2007-11-13 . chapter 1SQUEangst! |
 spiritualized 2007-08-17 . chapter 1Cute x3 I always thought thad Demyx ist too nice for the organisation >_>; Oh, but at least Zexion is nice to him. =] I don't know why people always associate Zexion and Demyx with each other? I can't remember seeing them together °° |
 Suu-mon 2007-07-18 . chapter 1You described every member so perfectly. :'D
In fact, this is so mind-blowingly amazing that I can't.. think anymore.
Woah, and for the first time writing Demyx, this is win! @3@
Gah, I love how you didn't give less detail to any character. You did it to the full potential! (TO ZE EXTREME!)
And I love how when you read it, it sounds so simple and sweet, but then, the second time you go through, you realize, suddenly, how complex and difficultly written it really is.
:'D |
 Talixaen 2007-07-07 . chapter 1 I think I love it. Realistic. Muy bien. |
 ChaosHarbor 2007-04-01 . chapter 1Wonderul. |
 Seto's Princess 2006-11-09 . chapter 1Very interesting. Lol, I know that doesn't say much but I did think it was good. |
 cheeky doggie 2006-11-03 . chapter 1I love it. (hehe, sorry if I'm strange for reviewing a story such a long time after it's been published, but meh, I'm weird like that.) I just love the ending, it's so...yeh, I love it. I can really imagine Zexion acting and talking like that too. I tried to draw it...but I'm bad with poses so it's a bit weird...;] beautiful work, hope to see others like this in the future! |
 Saxor 2006-10-14 . chapter 1 Well, wow. This little drabble has certainly enlightened me, that's for sure.
Demyx does seem to be the type to ask questions, doesn't he? Oh, and Zexion's response: "We cannot have and ending if we were never suppose to begin." Is absolutely and painfully heart-breaking, and yet also strangely beautiful...
I do hope you continue with your writings and that you're doing well. Bye for now. |
 Raina 2006-07-10 . chapter 1Lovely, lovely work. ♥ I am in awe once again, and my faves has just grown again. |
 GKit 2006-06-24 . chapter 1Amazing. Simply amazing. You managed to capture all of the characters well, especially Zexion. His last line was...oh, how to put it...well, you managed to wrap the entire purpose of the Organization and Nobodies into one sentence, where as it took the entire KHII game to do so otherwise. |
 Pyra2 2006-06-22 . chapter 1Wow! that's so...deep. I think you captured his character just fine. I love the last line! |
 MAKUBEX-KUN 2006-06-19 . chapter 1Reading this makes me want to meet Zexion as soon as possible in COM. I do not know what he is like because I have just played COM. I think Demyx is in character. Good job on writing how Saix and Larxene answered Demyx's question. |
 Broken TWiLiGHT Lullaby 2006-06-18 . chapter 1Wow! That was good! Great work. |
 organizedcure 2006-06-18 . chapter 1;-;
ZEXY IS SO EMO IT HURTS. |