as nicely done as the first one but a tid-bit akward to read since i am not religious
but very good story

This is good, VERY good. To me, it shows just how much
it takes to convert Draco. Even before I read your
profile, I could tell your religious denomination from
the key phrases, words, the manner of how the family
prayed at family prayer, and the description of some
of the pictures. You've done a very good job. Seems a
good base upon which to continue this story. Maybe you
could read my story, see my profile, "The Gift". I'm of
the same religious persuasion as you. I never thought
I'd meet another here, and its' good. Thanks. You're a
good writer.

*Wince* if I may say so, Draco Malfoy and strong religious beliefs do not mix. Avada (as in avada kedavra) has one d, you misspelled it once. Of course, not of coarse. Coarse means rough. Apart from my intense dislike of your genre, as magic surely disallows the presence of an onnipotent being, this was well written and I enjoyed reading it, for the most part. Keep up the good work.