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Reviews For: Undone

Ryu Sabakuno 2008-05-21 ch 1,	abuseIs this a one-shot? I hope not... I'll be checking out for a sequel now and then.
yellulhchicken 2006-10-16 ch 1,	abuseare yougoingo continue this?? I suppose that this story si supposed to have happened instead of the anime ending and instead of the fma movie "conqueror of shamballa" or something like that??
E.G. Sparks 2006-08-01 ch 1,	abuseWow. Let me first say that I've only watched part of a FMA episode because they don't show them in my area, or if they do it's at completely odd hours. I tell you this to illustrate the fact that you are a truly masterful storyteller. You made the character so real, so familiar, even when I know little to nothing about him. That is skill. Thank you for writing this!
CaptainKase 2006-06-21 ch 1,	abuse:D! YAY! Thank you~~! This story was so much love. My baseball bats and toaster ovens never even left the shelf. Excuse the late review. D: My hotmail inbox decided that you were junk mail, so I had to go looking for you. :3 I just barely found the e-mail. BUT NEVER FEAR! I'm here to review! First of all, I really like this scenario. ^_^ Al having his body back and Ed having his automail has always seemed like the right ending to me. Dunno why. Just did. Obviously it didn't seem like the right ending to 1) Ed in this fanfic. 2) The makers of the show. :/ (T__T bastards!) But that's okay. :3 I can see Ed being torn between happiness for his brother's body and a sort sadness/jealousy because he doesn't have his too. D: Poor Ed should know by now that he never gets a happy ending! It made me sad that Ed would leave Al. T__T Ed should ALWAYS be with Al! That's just the way that it's supposed to be. D: But that's okay too, because he'll come back when he gets his sexy sexy limbs and then he'll be 100% sexy sexy flesh. ...won't he? O_O (I GUESS WE'LL NEVER KNOW. ~hinthintnudgenudge~) Teehee. :3 Did you know...THAT I LOVE TEH ANGST!? Because homygoodness I totally do. I don't know what you're talking about, I think that you angst very well. :3 Thanks for that. Good angst is hard to come by. ;D And also, your writing is very lovely. It really appeals to the senses. :3 I wish that I followed Avatar more closely so that I could read your other works. DX But it's not really a fandom I'm familiar with. All that I have to say is...WRITE MORE FMA! Please? :D! If this is any evidence, I think that you could be an awesome FMA writer. :3 Anyway, I think that's enough out of me. :3 I love you, forever and always, for this awesome story. Thank you! ^O^!
ArcherofDarkness and Callie 2006-06-20 ch 1,	abuseYAY! you're writing FMA too! hugs I LOVE FMA! personally, i think that the manga is better, but there you go!I love ur writing and I know I'll love this story! Please update, I cant wait for more! (will it really be Shou though?)
Outsane 2006-06-18 ch 1,	abuseWahh! You can't just make this a drabble! We need more! More! I demand it!
Mirage992 2006-06-18 ch 1,	abuseWow! That was really good! Very angsty and sad, but not overwhelming and depressing. I hope you update soon! ~Mirage992
Keeper of the Times 2006-06-18 ch 1,	abusethat was really good i love it update soon please
i-luv-inuyasha1012 2006-06-18 ch 1,	abuse::squeals:: Yay! Now you're writing FMA stories...er, drabbles! This was pretty good - you captured Ed's thoughts well. I don't do good with angst, but I'll try to get this fic. :)
Sayuri-Jen 2006-06-18 ch 1,	abuseWow Wilderness Writer, that was suprisingly really well done for ur first FMA drabble. It was actually one of the best ones I've read! I too come off and on between ATLA and FMA, and i'm definetly going to check out your stories. You really captured Edward's thoughts and feelings well and I felt bad for him...it doesn't have to be angsty! Go on and finish this up! :.Sauki-Jen.:

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