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| Chaos-and-Serenity 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseWhat an ingenious insight into Kanna. I loved how Kohaku serves as example since he too is slowly becoming just like her as his humanity is striped away with each strike of his sickle. It feels like her to me, her odious yet subdued nature leaking through with such a devious and unkind thought. But at least she has some virtues, like patience... I love the simplicity of this story and the rare glimpse into this usually overlooked character. |
| sheenachi 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseKinda creepy. kinda sweet. wow |
| Aseret Kitsune 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was an amazing, morbidly beautiful fic. I love the details and imagery. Marvalous. Hope you don't mind me archiving this is my C2. |
| T'Shai 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseKanna seems to have a sort of sadistic love for Kohaku. I know that Kanna was naturally created from Naraku and to me it seems like you have her intriged with the proccess of becoming like her; wanting to feel the proccess herself. And having no one like herself, she loves the fact that there's someone who can share her state of life with her. That's what I got from it, but I would really like to know exactlly what you wanted us readers to understand from the peice. I'm interested. |
| My Soul Your Puppet 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseThat is so like love! OMG! THis sstory just has a simple yet complex breeze to it! It flows on the current and creates something big and wonderful! It is so romantic the way she says she can wait. After all, that is what love is about, ne? I like: Well keep up the breeze and go with the flow! Beloved Lea Chan Love YA! BYe BYE! |