A year ago, I decided I liked this pairing, but was never able to find any decent fandom for it. I'm glad I read this, it was remarkably well written, and got the message across nicely even with its short length. I liked it considerably much more than your "Drops of Gold" story, because even thought that was well written too, it lacked background for the developement of their feelings and there was more OOC-ness than I can really accept. This was great, and you should write more for this pairing. I tried a year ago to come up with something, maybe I'll go back to it.

What an ingenious insight into Kanna. I loved how Kohaku serves as example since he too is slowly becoming just like her as his humanity is striped away with each strike of his sickle. It feels like her to me, her odious yet subdued nature leaking through with such a devious and unkind thought. But at least she has some virtues, like patience...

I love the simplicity of this story and the rare glimpse into this usually overlooked character.

Kinda creepy. kinda sweet. wow

This was an amazing, morbidly beautiful fic. I love the details and imagery. Marvalous. Hope you don't mind me archiving this is my C2.

Kanna seems to have a sort of sadistic love for Kohaku.

I know that Kanna was naturally created from Naraku and to me it seems like you have her intriged with the proccess of becoming like her; wanting to feel the proccess herself. And having no one like herself, she loves the fact that there's someone who can share her state of life with her.

That's what I got from it, but I would really like to know exactlly what you wanted us readers to understand from the peice. I'm interested.

That is so like love! OMG! THis sstory just has a simple yet complex breeze to it! It flows on the current and creates something big and wonderful! It is so romantic the way she says she can wait. After all, that is what love is about, ne?

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Well keep up the breeze and go with the flow!

Beloved Lea Chan

Love YA! BYe BYE!