great story, i enjoyed it.

Good story, excellent one shot...Shame to see Ron end up that way.

Bubba

Thsi is Lil'slugger at his best. Thsi is a very emotional story that's makes readers cry, wonder and be surprised great jog and keep up the great work!

-Beast57
-Fear the Beast

;_;That's sad. You really struck a nerve with me in this fic.

Good story. You should have made this a tragedy as well as a drama due to the how tragic the death was. Sad but good.

Beyond awesome!

Can't wait to see what you come up with next!

Wow... that's really awful, poor Kim and Ron. Great job! That was spectacular!