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Pam t3h Spam
2008-01-18
ch 1,
abuseWhat a refreshing take on the SesshiRin (nonromantic) couple! Your depiction of Sesshoumaru's initial frustrations are both endearing and, in a way, more realistic than the majority of fics out there which simply show the slow process of his iciness melting. I think it makes sense that there was a great deal of contained frustration along the way too--he's not a perfect creature, after all.
Woode Seren
2006-09-15
ch 1,
abuseWow. This is good. It has both humor and a good character study. It was much more In Character than many stories around these days. Kudos.
Chaos-and-Serenity
2006-07-05
ch 1,
abuseI liked this little ficlet and the way you put words to his 'rogue streak.' Such a slight tendency to be spontaneous had cost him a lot, at least to someone like him.

I never could resist a well-written and insightful story about Sesshoumaru. Nicely done.
ManonLeChat
2006-07-02
ch 1,
abuseWonderful character-study of Sesshoumaru. I loved the phrase "a small, untidy star". And the observation that: "In all that time, no one— not a single soul— had ever looked to him [Sesshoumaru] for love as well as protection. He found he liked it" is brilliantly conceived.
Empatheia
2006-06-20
ch 1,
abuseAm I crazy, or have I seen this before? I seem to remember complimenting you on the phrase 'small, untidy star.'

I still love it.
Dana Daidouji
2006-06-20
ch 1,
abuseThis story is so sweet! I liked it! Oh and no romance involved, thank god!
Hououza
2006-06-19
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful story.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
sheenachi
2006-06-18
ch 1,
abuseAw, I loves it
T'Shai
2006-06-18
ch 1,
abuseInuyasha is the main star, but I find I like Sesshoumaru better. There is more mystery to him.

Sesshoumaru and his classic reviving of the human child Rin, proves untiring. To see this emotionless, uncaring demon give a species he claims detestable a second chance is truly delightful.

No matter how much he claims he hates the species, this one human child gave him something no other person would ever give. And deep down he knows he appriciates it.

I must say I enjoy reading the many different versions of this classic tale.
Aseret Kitsune
2006-06-18
ch 1,
abuseSuch a sweet moment. I love the imagery.
sueb262
2006-06-18
ch 1,
abuseI could swear I've read this before--did you take it down, modify it, and re-post it?

Anyway, I loved it then, and I love it now. Phrases like "a small, untidy star" and "It was insupportable" are part of what make it so delicious to read!
firessfrost
2006-06-18
ch 1,
abusePretty good! I like how you described Seshoumaru as unfeeling yet hesitating when it comes to Rin. Is this going to be mostly on Sess/Rin?? Or is it all the characters??

Plz update soon on ur next chapter.
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