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| Miss Pix 2008-06-14 ch 1,  | abuseThis is amazing. |
| Talks to Herself 2008-04-21 ch 4, | abuseThat was so funny! What happened next, I want to know. |
| NightmareAlive 2008-03-15 ch 4, | abuseWoo! An update! 'Are you cranking my chain!?' lol I love that. |
| PinkBlossoms 2007-06-23 ch 3, | abuseOh wow! Made me laugh plenty of times lol. Wonderful story. Please update soon! |
| squidfanatic 2007-03-25 ch 1, | abuseYou definately have a good story line down but I thin oyu need to add a little more. Try and make the dialogue a little more relaistic, it sounds a little too staged and you want to make a very authentic feel. Also, it may be a good idea to chnage the name just because when two characters have similar names it gets a little confusing. Try and add a little more introduction and decrease the use of said, told, and asked. Keep up the writing and have fun!! |
| NightmareAlive 2007-03-07 ch 3, | abuseYay, you updated! I loved the Peter Pan silhouette, I used to fear him, too. XD Anyway, keep up the good work! |
| TohruGranger 2007-02-05 ch 2, | abuseomg! that was so funny. im here in the school library during lunch and im trying so hard not to bust out laughing! it was funny when they heard the ABC song! |
| Frostleaf 2007-01-29 ch 2, | abusewell then update, thats pretty good. cotrats, i dont read this type of stuff and i think its good |
| NightmareAlive 2007-01-13 ch 2, | abuseI own this movie. 'Twas boring. This, however, is not. Continue please. |
| Ensiho 2006-11-19 ch 1, | abuseIt was pretty much all talk and no action. Plan on writing any more detail? |
| slinko 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abusethis is great! I own the movie 'blair witch project' and some extra movie about interveiws and crap...But I've never watched it. All I know is that 3 kids go inot the woods and dissapear. Personally, I'd rather watch a movie like your fanfiction! Update! |
| deadanimaegurl 2006-06-24 ch 1, | abuseliked it write more pleaz^_^ |