A fantastic story and an awesome read, so well written. It just drew the reader in and hit the emotions. Great plot, completely frightening supernatural entity and just loved the addition of Missouri, one of my fave OC's from the show. You had the brothers believable, perfectly in character as they faced the supernatural threat. All though you kept up the tension, even after the entity had been destroyed. Perfect ending, with great brotherly banter. Brilliant, a definite fave.

I really don't agree with you, Sam IS the more handsome sibling, lol

Totally loved. xD

Hey there!!

I read this awesome story ages ago, but just finished re-reading it now. Really, it's one of my favourites EVER in this site, and I can't thank you or congratulate you enough for it!

I have one question, just a thought, actually. About Dean dealing with what had happened with the entity and all. I just thought that, while it was absolutely understandable and logical that his trauma was based on how "hurt" Sam had been, maybe I would have expected him to be haunted by the fact that he had been ready to let Sam die (and die along with him), so sparring each other into "equals" wouldn't really fix >that<

What do you think?

Lots of love!

L xx

You have a great ability to paint the perfect scene. Your narrative flows flawlessly. From beginning to end, through highs and lows, laughter and tears, you kept me entertained.

A job well done. A story well written. Thank you for posting this, xJx

This is the second time I've read this fic, and it still hypnotizes me til the very end and it's still one of my absolute faves.(Again)Wonderful job!-Gives whole plate o' cookies-

your story is so beautiful, made me cry, still crying and I am in scool...trying to look like Im accully doing some work, guess my cover is blown. Time to get some coffee then.
your writing is really good, you should get paid for writing like this/jenny

Aw man, what an epic, but really, it was quite elaborate and very fine with detail, altough I really don't want to know if one even has the chance to survive that set of injuries seriously.. well, stranger things have happened and well, aren't those two the epitome of strange?? The end pleased me *g* so Winchester!!
Cat

I have never taken the time to review this, but I would like you to know that I have this chapter bookmarked so that I can re-read it whener I feel the need. It is heartbreakingly beautiful, how much the brothers need each other. Sam's despair and confusion upon waking was so realistic. I do not know if you are writing fanfic anymore, but if this was a book, I would buy it.

I'll have you know that I deprived myself of sleep every night for about four nights this week staying up late just to read this story...And dude...it's a great story. So well thought out and written. Sad, sweet, terrifying(Man did it freak me out when Tara was all "Boris is coming". Seriously. That whole part was so creepy)funny at times(I laughed so hard at what Dean told Sam about honey)

Anyway, yes. Very good story. Now if you excuse me, I'll catch up on some much needed sleep;)

Hey! I know you completed this in 2006 but I just recently found it and read it over the course of 4 days. Just wanted to let you know what I thought. Beautiful! That's all that needs to be said. I'll be reading your other stories as I am sure they will be just as good.

Cindy.

that was an awesome story!

I truly loved your story. I really liked the journey that the boys were on. Sam getting in touch with his powers is a theme that I would like to explore more. It would be great if the boys have another weapon for their fight. It is now 4am and I am supposed to be up in less than 5 hours... but it was worth it. Thanks!

I was going to comment at the end, but this chapter (11) was particularly brutal. I hate to say it, but I love when the boys go up against impossible odds just because it has to be done. That is what makes a hero. I love your writing. I can actually see the warehouse and the struggle while I read. Great Job!

Oh wow.
Just...wow.

I love this fiction. It was SO wonderfully written, and your hard work just shines through it all.
You've captured everyone's personality so well, and the plot was genious. I couldn't stop reading it from the moment I first clicked on the title.
Your hurt/comfort in this story was definitely my favorite part. The tenderness of Dean caring for Sam, and the love shared on both their parts, just absolutely melted me.
Your writing is amazing. Never stop!