A great story. Very good.

You are truly gifted. I suppose I should have learned that from "Lies" though.

I love how they all tell off their injuries in such a succinct, effeciant way. It seems very true to form for them. Also, the idea of only one rule is very clever. I liked the feel to this story. It was tense when they were tense and relaxed when they were relaxed. Nice job. I especially love the last line, great way to end this fic. Keep writing!