It is sorta unrealistic and goes against the how and comics. However I find your writing very good and nicely descriptive so all and all it was a good fic :)

Aw

I loved this, it was very emotional. I really like Pietro, I always knew he had a nice side in him, I feel bad for him and Wanda. (Mostly Wanda since she was put in that asylum place)

unrealistic

Interseting, I quite like it. I think it would be the good intro for an actual story? Are you planning to write more? If you do, I'll definately read!

Poor Pietro. Youre a incredible writter. It touched me.

Great oneshot! You got Pietro just right! :D

I thought that this was a good little touch-touch story. One instance of her flinging him around the room doesn't sound like enough to have her haunting his dreams and stuff, so I'm wondering if theres more to that? But otherwise good. Good idea, good descriptions of emotion and all that good stuff.