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| Maze2010 2006-06-25 ch 1, | abuse(hugs LoneTread) (Umm. . .that never happened) Thank you Kolchak is not completely abandoned! |
| ozma914 2006-06-21 ch 1, | abuseI haven't seen the show, but I read this anyway -- call me a glutton for punishment! And even though I didn't understand all the specifics, I didn't have any trouble figuring out the generalities, and enjoyed them very much. Well written mysteries will always be a better read than stories that lay it all out, but are badly written. |
| Faith-Catherine 2006-06-21 ch 1, | abuseThe ending was sad, but hopeful. |
| Siriel the treelady 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseAwesome awesome!! good job. You know this scene had to happen somewhere, and this is an excellent rendering of it. Good adjectives, and dialogue-vs-internal thoughts. But I've always known you have an excellent command of language. I really am gonna have to buy that DVD... |