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Maze2010
2006-06-25
ch 1,
abuse(hugs LoneTread) (Umm. . .that never happened)

Thank you Kolchak is not completely abandoned!
ozma914
2006-06-21
ch 1,
abuseI haven't seen the show, but I read this anyway -- call me a glutton for punishment! And even though I didn't understand all the specifics, I didn't have any trouble figuring out the generalities, and enjoyed them very much. Well written mysteries will always be a better read than stories that lay it all out, but are badly written.
Faith-Catherine
2006-06-21
ch 1,
abuseThe ending was sad, but hopeful.
Siriel the treelady
2006-06-19
ch 1,
abuseAwesome awesome!!

good job. You know this scene had to happen somewhere, and this is an excellent rendering of it. Good adjectives, and dialogue-vs-internal thoughts. But I've always known you have an excellent command of language.
I really am gonna have to buy that DVD...
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