yay cool story please update soon I suck at reviewing

Another good story. I'm starting to see a pattern here, though. You start a new story, do two chapters, and then move on to another. What's the problem? They're great stories!

Oh, well. I'm curious to see how this one will turn out...

ouchy a knife through the ribs

cool

awesome story plz make more

now that is my style of wat naruto should be like! :)
not so surprising he woud look lik his father..

Interesting start. A bit rushed, perhaps, but not bad... I'd like to see more!

Damn it!Update! please!

WOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON!

This is a little disjointed and confusing. Naruto is almost violently angry with Kakashi for abandoning his training, but after his transformation he's agreeable and happy to be trained? The two don't really go together, at least not so easily and without a lot of work in between. You have good sentence structure and grammar though. So the story is easily read.
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plz update the great story
its one of the best ever

Graet stoey please update when you get the time 9/10.

So far I really like this story. I won't fav it until their are more chapters. Please update soon and have a happy holidays!

oh, i like this Naruto (a lot) i also look forward to the next chapter.

I love this fic. It's really cool how Naruto became stronger and darker. Keep writing plz!