It's wonderfully written... and yet somehow this makes me want to cry...

One word: brilliant.

I loved the last line.

Very thoughtful. Well written. I look forward to viewing your other stories.

Poor Anakin, always so confused.

This was done very well, as usual. :) I enjoyed reading it.

keep writing!

Wince. Obi-wan just didnt know, but the slave mentality is so deep in Anakin Very well thought out. thanks for another good story

Remember me :)? It's nice to read more Anakin-while-training fics by you. Like everyone else at the tf.n boards, I have to ask, will there be more? Please, please, please.

LOL. That last line was funy. It's an interesting story... I don't think Anakin acyully trusted the force.. did he?

A very nice story from Anakin's early life. Good plot, good characters, and overall a very well-polished story. Recommended.

A very interesting idea. And a haunting story, foreshadowing things to come. It's so sad that Obi-Wan doesn't realize what's happened... but if he did, we wouldn't have Star Wars, would we. ;-) Congratulations on your writing skills - stories like this one make fan fiction a readworthy genre!

Weird story. Kinda cool.

Really good story! I loved it. Well, I love alot of Star Wars stories, but keep on writting them._

Frightening. Unnerving. Its a look into Anakin's mind and it foreshadows the problems that will arise in the future. And yet, I can't be anything but sympathetic for the boy. He is really only a lonely little boy lost in space with no one to trust but himself. It is sad that the Jedi don't quite understand this, they are expecting him to conform to their ways too fast. *sighs* Sorry, my habit is to get off on tangants when I only meant to say how very well-written this is and though I *enjoyed* it because it was a excellent look at Young Ani, it is still a very bitter-sweet tale. Beautifully done. Thank you for posting it.

Good stuff, FW! As always! I like how Anakin's darkside was peeking out

at times...very cool.

cool

Another well-done Anakin piece.