OMFG I LOVED IT. I hope you update soon.

its been a while since you last update are you ever

going to finish the story its getting good.

This is really good. I can't wait to read the rest!

this story pwns :D hope u update soon :) looking really forward for the next chapter :) good luck with ur story and the next chapter and please hurry up and update :)

love dragi

Fantaic.

Please update soon.

That was so sad, I was truly touched when you described how Udonna recalled past memories of her child and husband.

But is Koragg also gonna take part in your story, I do hope so.

I love your story and hope you'll update soon.

i like it alot, please update soon!

Hey, that was an awesome chapter! It's cool how you're building a history to it. UPDATE SOON!

This is great

Oh my God... this is going to be a magnificent story; I can just tell... Update soon!

I also think Koragg is apart of it some how, especially after his 'flashback' during "Koragg's Trial".

i love this story and can not wait for next chapter

Excellent chapter. I could feel the emotion you were trying to get out of it. You know, sorrow from the memories.

Anyway, like I said, it was great. I hope you update soon!

Rachel

i think i can help you a bit on the chapter that is based on Koragg's trail(sp?) please reply because i have several thoughts about it

I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way you described what Udonna was feeling. Please update soon.