 Gaby Black 2007-08-06 . chapter 1Good story. It was well-written and very true to the characters. I actually wrote a one-shot about what happened right after the scene in the hospital wing, but yours is less fluffy! I actually hate JK for killing Remus and Tonks... :( they're such wonderful characters, and you've made a great job with them, especially for your first Remus/Tonks!
- Gaby |
 X X Ringo X X 2007-02-04 . chapter 1Aw, it's really cute. I love it. Please write some more Remus/Tonks fanfic, it rox and you write it so well! |
 Io.sono.Emilia 2006-11-26 . chapter 1I thought it was pretty good. I came here looking for "Shopping with Sirius", which was really long in the updating over on MNFF, but I found that it was temporarily deleted. Please, don't make it semi-permanent. It was a cute story, as was this. Thanks for the read. |
 Eat A Taco 2006-08-04 . chapter 1YEAH!
I figured I'd return the fic reviewing favor and (of course) I read the Remus/Tonks first. The summary was great, and I absolutely loved the beginning.
The end? It was good but it was kind of a quick. I HATED "“I can’t do this anymore,” Remus muttered. " I absolutely HATED that part. If you transitioned differently it would'e been a lot better. (but i'm being mean, aren't I?) I love the patronus part. Especially how Tonks fails to explain it in more detail. "A big wolf." That part was priceless.
(I'm weird that way)
Anyways, all in all it WAS a great fic, I liked it a lot, but that one part where Remus turns was really starting to annoy me. But it was a nice "hidden moment" between the hospital wing and dear Dumbly's funeral. |
 TheGoldenSeraphim 2006-07-13 . chapter 1Squee!
Okay, undignified squealing over. No more of that.
Seriously, though, that was great. Both of them were perfectly in character, but better, somehow. Their argument was perfect and I absolutely loved Remus's "Beauty and the Beast" comment and how Tonks reacted to it. It's really, really sweet. :)
Cheers!
~*~LIZ |
 humhallelujah 2006-06-20 . chapter 1Cute! Very nice, the summary in particular was eye-catching. |
 Silence in Mind 2006-06-19 . chapter 1That was brilliant. I'm thinking that's like a made-up hidden scene between the hospital and Dumbledore's funeral?
Either way, it was excellent. I love the pairing, too, Keep it up. |
 Love Lily 2006-06-18 . chapter 1I liked it. |
 hljhhhh 2006-06-18 . chapter 1Aw, that was sweet. You captured the mood between the two very nicely. Kudos. |