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| ferocious mope 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuseloved it. a world without kyro is a sad.. bobby/kitty world. and bobby/kitty is just gross. |
| Rhiannon Merdon 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseWell written, heart-breaking. Great little one-shot, and a perfect angst - you've got the Kyro thing down to a T. Only one little problem: Jean destroyed the jet, so I'm not sure how the X-men got away. But as that's barely relevant...good job, and thanks. R&R when/if you can - my fictionpress stories are better. ~Rhiannon |
| El Burrito 2006-07-21 ch 1, | abuseWow that was GREAT! It was short, sure, but every line was so real, so full of pain. This was really, really great, not of plot or anything, but the way you use words and your characters. Two thumbs up. |
| LoveAroundEmbers 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abusewow, that was so good! Sad, but good. I love Kyro's, as you, especially yours, haha. |
| Violet Fairychild 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this! I think you did a fantastic job of keeping the both of them in character. Thanks for sharing! |
| fieryirishgirl 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseGreat! I think you and your writing is turning me into a Kyro fan! |
| Megumi Okaya 2006-06-29 ch 1, | abuseWow! Another awesome work from a gifted writer! =) I really look forward to your works, honestly. I like the way you give life to the characters and make them seem so real. You also have a good sense of persuasion. I was a Kitty-Bobby fan before, but I was converted when I read "The Difference Between". I look forward to reading more from you. Keep on writing! =) |
| Signal the Rifleman 2006-06-24 ch 1, | abusethat was great... that's really are there is to it :) |
| .Razorblades.And.Long.Ropes... 2006-06-21 ch 1, | abuseThis was an amazing story. I was slightly confused about the ending. Did you have John die or not? I think you should continue this story with a more of a Kitty-centric point of view. You actually converted me to Kitty/John pairing. I WAS a Ryro fan. Not anymore though. So if you could pleae continue...please? |
| SeraphinaPiera 2006-06-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow...wow. It takes a lot to impress me, but you've done it. Amazingly well written-either as a first chapter or a one-shot. Loved the word choices for certain parts of this. Very well done! |
| pxleno52 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was amazing =0 Keep up the awesome writing! |
| cheerleaderchcik 2006-06-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg do not make this a one shot please its brillaint u write great! gi ll x |
| Digital Damita 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abuseAw so cute :) Love it |
| Garden Spade 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseReally good. I mean, excellent. |
| Forget-Me-Nots and Marigold... 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully amazingly fantastically awesome! But the last sentece was by far the greatest and my favorite, and I hope you dont mind but I am so going to copy/paste it and put it in my stickie notes on my computer with all the other awesome quotes I find, because its that fantastic! |